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《出走》唱酬集

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kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-15 01:04:24 Post subject: 《出走》唱酬集

. 出走 . kokho 19/4/2004 一个波扣一个浪一闪连一个烁 . 操縱就晨羲般眩燃我命运的黄昏一个幻扣一个环一伞遮一个淋漓 . 苍桑也跨越过绚染妳飘泊的鬓脚一扇门开一线光一际无望的沙漠 . 视抹拭了妳脉脉秋水随岁岁白了云蓝了天一个月牙门封了一个月牙门攀 . 上缠绕了有一滴欲望就有芽有茎的绿油油一片墙扣围了地一角院锁了钢链 . 蹬破楼板也要开个关不住、满堂春的溜溜天的蓝要浪拍岸的边拍成香滨的欢笑的冒咻咻 . 一扇门开一线光关不住的溜溜就断了海角的天崖锻了海天舞着舞着 .　　　　　　　　　　妳左手我右手牵呀牵的出走 . . _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-15 01:13:31 Post subject:

全屏观赏 http://oson.ca/kokho/2kk.swf 。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-05-15 01:35:11 Post subject:

爽！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-05-15 02:03:27 Post subject:

哇噻！音乐很棒。“冒咻咻“有趣！ _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2007-05-15 09:10:56 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

爽！

谢谢抬爱。。。

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白水
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Posted: 2007-05-15 09:36:02 Post subject:

诗情, 画意, 美妙的音乐. 置顶一周好好欣赏. KOK不能收门票喔, 白水无铜

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Posted: 2007-05-15 12:00:46 Post subject:

很喜欢，好享受。

Kokho 的语言脱俗新奇魔幻，令人浮想联翩。

看这几个排比句，重迭词。

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一个波扣一个浪一闪连一个烁
一个幻扣一个环一伞遮一个淋漓
一扇门开一线光一际无望的沙漠
一个月牙门封了一个月牙门攀
一片墙扣围了地一角院锁了钢链

有芽有茎的绿油油
满堂春的溜溜
欢笑的冒咻咻

真个是一环扣一环，重重叠叠的意象...
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Posted: 2007-05-15 12:12:55 Post subject:

太好了祝贺kokho! _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-15 21:37:36 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

哇噻！

音乐很棒。“冒咻咻“有趣！

这首　是２００４年很热门的　ＴＥＡＲＳ

可不是我写的。。。

这是，我在进入　另类文字前的最后一首　传统诗歌。。

谢谢　博弈。。

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kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-15 21:41:31 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

诗情, 画意, 美妙的音乐. 置顶一周好好欣赏.

KOK不能收门票喔, 白水无铜 Wink

白水袋里似无铜　双语诗文更胜金　！！！

。。。谢谢　品读　 Cool

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Posted: 2007-05-15 21:46:22 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

太好了

祝贺kokho!

这是２００４年，我到访２０多个网站，和３０多位诗友
唱酬的纪录。。。

芦苇把其中的１２首，做成这个ｆｌａｓｈ来纪念　！！

《》大家　可要　　看看其他人的好诗。。。

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Cool

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Posted: 2007-05-15 21:53:38 Post subject:

Lake wrote:

很喜欢，好享受。

Kokho 的语言脱俗新奇魔幻，令人浮想联翩。

看这几个排比句，重迭词。

Quote:

真个是一环扣一环，重重叠叠的意象...

谢谢　Ｌａｋｅ　你读诗　最仔细。。
希望看到你　早日突破　！！！

Cool

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Posted: 2007-05-16 00:26:53 Post subject:

才看，但不晚。好！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-05-16 03:22:15 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

太好了

祝贺kokho!

这个芦苇太牛了，真专业！好。
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Posted: 2007-05-16 05:07:17 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

kokho wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

太好了

祝贺kokho!

这个芦苇太牛了，真专业！好。

欣赏的诗歌,音乐!
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Posted: 2007-05-16 09:39:46 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

才看，但不晚。好！！

谢谢杨兄弟支持。。

Cool

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kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-16 09:41:42 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

太好了

祝贺

这个芦苇太牛了，真专业！好。

说得对，我代转告。。。

Cool

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Posted: 2007-05-16 09:43:54 Post subject:

鲁齐 wrote:

欣赏的诗歌,音乐!

谢谢鲁齐

音乐的标题 tears = 眼泪。。 2004 很流行。

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Posted: 2007-05-17 02:02:55 Post subject:

祝君诗酬之路象春花一样开放!!!!!!!!!! _________________ 孤独的执烛者，在黑暗的水面上留下火苗的伤口～～～～～

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Posted: 2007-05-17 02:05:45 Post subject:

祝君诗酬之路象春花一样开放溢香!!!!!!!!!! _________________ 孤独的执烛者，在黑暗的水面上留下火苗的伤口～～～～～

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