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《乌鸦的摇滚》
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PostPosted: 2007-05-15 05:02:03    Post subject: 《乌鸦的摇滚》 Reply with quote
《乌鸦的摇滚》

乌鸦天上过，缄默如桥墩上猫
它们有自己方言。子夜时，它们木讷的嘶哑失眠
常常移情别恋于夜莺亮在露珠上的清辉。

它们摹仿，一桶又一桶黑油漆，睁开眼，流下泪水
漆黑忧郁散开，更加迷茫，无法解体，崩溃。

乌鸦与乌鸦在一起摇滚，睁一只眼，闭一只眼，眼里只有乌鸦。
它们指责夜莺“甜。”“流俗，没有大漠孤烟沧桑。”

大漠，仿佛它们敬仰的一只更大乌鸦。

2007/4/28
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PostPosted: 2007-05-15 05:20:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
颇有新意。最喜欢这一句“大漠，仿佛它们敬仰的一只更大乌鸦。”
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PostPosted: 2007-05-15 12:09:32    Post subject: Reply with quote
不着痕迹的讽喻,欣赏学习了~问好了兄! Very Happy
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