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北方夜静静(在不远处徘徊的是静静的死神)
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PostPosted: 2007-05-12 14:00:03    Post subject: 北方夜静静(在不远处徘徊的是静静的死神) Reply with quote

北方夜静静(静静的死神)

题记:前几日我跟西原到西宁北面的互助县去找衣郎,他带我们到县城南郊的土族风俗村的一个农家煮酒论诗。那个叫做正月姐的蒙古尔(土族人自称蒙古尔,据说蒙古人的后裔)姑娘招待我们,当日我们像古人一样在酒酣之际击节而歌,其中《北方有佳人》歌之不能罢。半夜我们困倦,正月姐从外面回来,她说今晚寒气很重,她为我们在土炕中生火,因为怕我们冷,她特意多添加煤。晚上我一直难以入睡,凌晨我感觉头痛欲裂,西原与衣郎也有同感,起初我们以为青稞酒有问题,次日才知道是轻度煤气中毒,我们这才大惊失色,若不是我半夜醒来昨晚就静静地死去。席间我们曾经约定作同题诗,这是第二次,上次是《北园村100号(巴别塔尖)》。今晚我突然想起前几日静静的乡村,于是作这首《北方夜静静》,同时其中隐含一首附诗《静静的死神》。

月亮在窗外升起,寒冷在空中降下
静静的北方的乡村,觊觎王位的年轻人在饮酒
一个陌生的蒙古尔女人为他们斟酒
他们在讨论过去的王国
(他们不知道一起饮酒的还有死神)

山中的野菜很美味,自己酿的青稞酒很美味
他们有点醉的感觉
他们跟姑娘开玩笑
姑娘从门外回来,她说今晚寒气很重
他们击节而歌《北方有佳人》:
北方有佳人
绝世而独立
一笑倾人城
再笑倾人国
宁不知倾城与倾国
佳人难再得
他们一次一次地歌唱
他们都在想将来在这样北方的乡村山居
(他们不知道听他们唱歌的还有死神)

深夜,他们终于困倦
姑娘为他们准备温暖的炕
他们说这样的女人真好
他们说几句其他话就睡去
他们感觉窗外的山有点奇怪
(他们不知道睡在他们中间的还有死神)

月亮在坠入山谷,他们坠入梦
在这样静静的北方的乡村
他们在梦中说梦话
他们一定在做王的梦
(他们不知道死神正在旁边看着他们微笑)

凌晨,他们从恶梦中醒来
他们梦到自己静静地死去
他们感到头痛欲裂
他们看到夜晚一片漆黑
他们突然感觉到自己的遥远
他们不知如何等到天明
在这静静的北方的乡村
他们四处叫喊,却找不到那个斟酒的蒙古尔姑娘
他们突然记起那个蒙古尔姑娘多么像死神的脸庞
(他们终于发现在不远处悠闲地徘徊的是死神)

2007-4-10于西宁
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PostPosted: 2007-05-12 16:38:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

妙!
好诗!
诗味足!
内涵丰富!
诗意的饮酒!
诗意的死神!
诗意的蒙古尔女人!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-12 18:08:51    Post subject: 诗人好 Reply with quote

拜读。深感不安!祝福!
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下一个偶像是野兽
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PostPosted: 2007-05-12 19:25:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

有味道。问好
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PostPosted: 2007-05-12 20:41:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

曹谁兄也来了:)问好握手!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-12 20:47:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

这个笔名有意思 Surprised
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PostPosted: 2007-05-12 22:17:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好诸位,从前经常听西原提起北美枫,昨天晚上想起就过来。
居然在这里同金金不期而遇,应当拥抱。

韩少君:靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!
中国古代似乎盛产才子。
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PostPosted: 2007-05-13 01:56:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
这个笔名有意思 Surprised

怎么我一看就联想到历史上的三曹父子。希望多拜读大作!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-13 02:14:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏~北方农村应该是这样的,我上小学和初中的时候就被煤气煤过,脑涨发晕,直把头往墙上撞!很可怕的经历!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-13 22:08:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

如是我闻:大音希声,大象无形。
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PostPosted: 2007-05-14 09:21:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有史诗般的气象!
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