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〖金金作品〗理发店所见

金金
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Posted: 2007-05-08 21:21:27 Post subject: 〖金金作品〗理发店所见

■金金有一次我在理发店洗头老板把热水凉水一起兑着声音渐小突然听见隔壁大声吵闹起来，下意识地转过头向街上看，好多人都朝隔壁压倒一切的声源走去那么一瞬间，我又转回头，仿佛没声音老板放下手里的桶，看着我我们都没说话，迅速出了门我站到较高的台阶上，隔着一群人往隔壁门里眺望 “你必须交税，这是国家规定” 一个肯定而急噪的声音传出来，我使劲踮起脚隐约看见税务员的大盖帽和蓝制服人群哗啦一下从中间散开，税务员抱着一摞鞋盒子走出门来鞋店老板紧跟着走出来，气喘吁吁地跟在税务员身后，其他几个税务员分站到门内外气氛稍微缓和了一下，“我现在没钱” 鞋店老板慢吞吞地说。“那你回家去拿” 税务员看着他，把鞋盒子放到旁边三轮车上鞋店老板转身走了，我回到屋里洗头外面人群还没散，我头发淋着水遮住了外面人群的议论声洗发、擦干、吹风，好长时间走出理发店，一切像没发生一样平静过了一星期我又来洗头，一进门几个税务员齐刷刷看着我还没多想，一个税务员拿掉嘴里的烟对我说 “老板回家拿钱去了，等一会儿吧” 2007.5.7 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2007-05-08 21:26:37 Post subject:

现实和诗歌只有一步之遥共同努力 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-05-08 22:23:03 Post subject:

有戏剧性.问好金金. _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-08 22:46:14 Post subject:

戏剧诗　的开始。。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

舒中
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Posted: 2007-05-09 00:05:11 Post subject:

身临其境,问好

金金
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Posted: 2007-05-09 00:44:49 Post subject:

哈哈，如果说戏剧，那我们的生活就是，大家都是演员。问好 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

金金
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Posted: 2007-05-09 00:45:20 Post subject:

我想关注下民生了。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

司马策风
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Posted: 2007-05-09 21:58:41 Post subject:

有戏剧性。语言太过散文化。 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

金金
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Posted: 2007-05-09 22:27:05 Post subject:

问好司马策风显得是散了``` _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-09 23:34:55 Post subject:

再努力　支持　；））。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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