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凭吊

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Posted: 2007-05-06 04:57:06 Post subject: 凭吊

凭吊一对亘古的夫妻没有人知道他们的年令只有成吉思汗为他起了个名字哈日巴拉山把他的妻子称谓泡子后来诗人称她哈拉巴湖愚公胜利了愚公消灭了这对夫妻将他们的躯体碎成韲粉把粉末扬在路上任人踏车轧泡子也终于死了泡子拋弃了子孙再没有青山绿水再没有秋波荡漾只有秋季在她的身上长满了枯黄昔日的繁荣不见了吃尽了鱼虾的人们再也没有回来供人享受的宾馆变成了医院收集着夜间的呻吟从此只接纳痛苦一群送葬者围住一个巨大的墓穴垂下的头再也没有抬起

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Posted: 2007-05-06 07:13:40 Post subject:

寓意不错！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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Posted: 2007-05-06 16:57:23 Post subject:

有寓意,可精炼.

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Posted: 2007-05-06 23:53:04 Post subject:

谢二位诗人偏爱

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Posted: 2007-05-09 00:49:08 Post subject:

提读！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2007-05-09 03:13:28 Post subject:

谢金金赏读

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Posted: 2007-05-09 04:35:36 Post subject:

后半部分,余味悠悠,欣赏 _________________ 杨光的语言空间 http://blog.sina.com.cn/languagespace

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Posted: 2007-05-09 05:01:12 Post subject:

昔日的繁荣不见了吃尽了鱼虾的人们再也没有回来供人享受的宾馆变成了医院收集着夜间的呻吟从此只接纳痛苦学习~

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Posted: 2007-05-09 15:44:14 Post subject:

感谢二位诗人,祝好!

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