天淡云闲 童生
Joined: 24 Mar 2007 Posts: 74
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Posted: 2007-05-07 19:21:06 Post subject: 惜春 |
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惜春
“慢下来,再慢下来”
我踩着春的影子
企图挽留那季春韵
早春二月,玫瑰涂红花园
一滴醇露于草尖取走我
那时
我没在身后留一条小径
一个心思,把荒芜了一冬的情节
斟满酒杯
四月,露珠噙着我的泪
下一场雨,冲走春
淹没精心呵护的细节
这个时候,我紧追的脚步
可有花香残留 |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2007-05-07 21:42:23 Post subject: |
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轻渺的感觉
能飞起来 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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江晨 秀才
Joined: 22 Feb 2007 Posts: 102 Location: 中国浙江 江晨Collection |
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杨光 秀才
Joined: 01 Jun 2006 Posts: 683
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-09 01:39:43 Post subject: |
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四月,露珠噙着我的泪
下一场雨,冲走春 |
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天淡云闲 童生
Joined: 24 Mar 2007 Posts: 74
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Posted: 2007-05-09 02:47:41 Post subject: |
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hepingdao wrote: |
轻渺的感觉
能飞起来 |
谢你评读!渴望看你指点不足 |
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天淡云闲 童生
Joined: 24 Mar 2007 Posts: 74
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Posted: 2007-05-09 02:49:40 Post subject: |
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谢过朋友!多批呀 |
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天淡云闲 童生
Joined: 24 Mar 2007 Posts: 74
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Posted: 2007-05-09 02:51:15 Post subject: |
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问好朋友!请多指点 |
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天淡云闲 童生
Joined: 24 Mar 2007 Posts: 74
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Posted: 2007-05-09 02:51:56 Post subject: |
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赵福治 wrote: |
四月,露珠噙着我的泪
下一场雨,冲走春 |
问好乡里!你大胆批 |
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