远山云树
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Joined: 27 May 2006
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Location: 中国四川
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 Posted: 2006-05-28 04:40:31 Post subject: 《李清照》 |
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最后一次见你身影
是那个梧桐更兼细雨的黄昏
我从晚来风疾的灰天里飞过
你正伤心
喝了三杯两盏薄酒
独自守着那西风帘卷的窗儿
等天黑
那个黄昏
风鬟雾鬓的你
开始憔悴
并不是浓睡未消残酒
也不是因为悲秋
但我感觉
你比那东篱下的黄花
还要清瘦
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南方寒阳
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| Posted: 2006-05-28 04:44:03 Post subject: |
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| 忧伤的旋律：））问好！ |
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远山云树
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[quote="南方寒阳"]忧伤的旋律：））问好！[/quote]
远握 诚请赐教
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尹士林
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Location: 河北保定易县中学
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| Posted: 2006-05-29 16:14:29 Post subject: 有韵味 |
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有些李清照的韵味
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远山云树
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| Posted: 2006-05-29 23:00:16 Post subject: Re: 有韵味 |
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[quote="尹士林"]有些李清照的韵味[/quote]
谢兄评阅。也许算不上创作，只是截取李词中一些句子做的拼接组合。或近于一种文字游戏罢 |
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