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天才诗话

郭思远
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Posted: 2007-05-04 01:34:10 Post subject: 天才诗话

天才诗话奋笔直书千古事，丹心一片文章中。潦倒孤影横泪挥，满腔热血洒江东。 _________________ 诗坛驰驱，我行我素！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/gongziguo

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Posted: 2007-05-04 02:44:35 Post subject:

怎么这么多感慨？问好。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-05-04 04:40:23 Post subject: Re: 天才诗话

郭思远 wrote:

天才诗话

奋笔直书千古事，
丹心一片文章中。
潦倒孤影横泪挥，
满腔热血洒江东。

郭兄际遇与报复、志向在下完全悉知。同感。结好。因好诗，故挑剔“蛋骨”如下：“文章中”三字犯三平尾；“泪”字拗；“挥”字平，为第三句韵脚，似亦不当，是否改为“潦倒孤影挥浑泪”？请酌之。浅见。呵呵。
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