半溪明月
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 Posted: 2007-05-03 05:55:56 Post subject: 让我们一起去爬山 |
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让我们一起去爬山
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清晨，让我们一起去爬山
爬上山的最高峰
采撷大朵大朵的白云
那是我们放养的情感与灵思
蓝天是块诗意的田园
我们播种石头和鱼骨
喂养鸽子与小羊
猎捕长有幸福斑点的梅花鹿
夜晚，你伸出蓝色手指
点亮银盘样的壁灯
在黑丝绒日记的扉页
写下藏有星星密码的情书
这是上世纪的故事
也是我们正密谋的一次远行
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2007-05-03 06:43:03 Post subject: |
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半溪明月的诗歌
透亮的诗意，好
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戴玨
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| Posted: 2007-05-03 08:44:39 Post subject: |
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第二節不好理解，第三節很美。
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nobody
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| Posted: 2007-05-03 15:17:47 Post subject: |
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这是上世纪的故事
也是我们正密谋的一次远行
纯熟起来。
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-05-03 15:48:17 Post subject: |
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| hepingdao wrote: |
半溪明月的诗歌
透亮的诗意，好 |
问好岛主,节日好! |
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-05-03 15:55:10 Post subject: |
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我想第二节还是写一种写诗需要的状态吧
多谢戴玨老师提出这个问题,我会再考虑~
节日问好 |
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-05-03 15:58:52 Post subject: |
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| nobody wrote: |
这是上世纪的故事
也是我们正密谋的一次远行
纯熟起来。 |
呵呵,你还是多批批~节好!  |
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沙漠
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| Posted: 2007-05-05 00:46:06 Post subject: |
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这一首的内涵和诗意结合得不错！
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-05-05 02:25:35 Post subject: |
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| 沙漠 wrote: |
| 这一首的内涵和诗意结合得不错！ |
问好沙漠,多谢你提读~节好! |
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