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风哥，雨妹，枫歌

白水
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Posted: 2014-10-27 15:59:28 Post subject: 风哥，雨妹，枫歌

风哥，雨妹，枫歌风哥风起时，我在枫岭看风推动一堆堆浓云把一群群牛羊赶进辽阔的牧场我问风哥，怎么不见牧童？远方有人弄笛萧萧，如风雨妹数了数，“雨”只含四滴泪再多一滴便是水了你为什么要哭？滴滴嗒嗒地滴干一朵朵乌云天就蓝了，我们登上高高的铁塔 “快看，“ 你说：枫林似海红叶飞舟枫歌喜欢在大风中观枫喜欢与漫山枫蝶乘风共舞你深深地懂得, 一片叶的起飞必然伴随的坠落飞吧，仅此一次，一生一世的等待莫过于比翼蓝天

chenrunmin
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Posted: 2014-10-27 23:57:46 Post subject:

一组很精美的短诗，有意境,有感觉，欣赏，学习，问好. _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

黑眼睛的苏珊
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Posted: 2014-10-28 13:22:15 Post subject:

你太有想象力了，好喜欢你这首诗，比我的散文强多了。

白水
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Posted: 2014-10-29 04:36:33 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

一组很精美的短诗，有意境,有感觉，欣赏，学习，问好.

谢谢你的鼓励，问好

白水
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Posted: 2014-10-29 04:39:23 Post subject:

黑眼睛的苏珊 wrote:

你太有想象力了，好喜欢你这首诗，比我的散文强多了。

谢谢鼓励。你的散文很棒的，等你的散文集。
那天我们风雨无阻去赏枫，别有一番情趣呢。谢谢你，不是你这才女拿着小鞭子赶着，还真不知哪天才动笔。 Razz

山城子
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Posted: 2014-11-01 05:39:29 Post subject:

喜欢明朗的短制！！远握白水！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

风动
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Posted: 2014-11-01 11:01:05 Post subject:

一片叶的起飞必然伴随的坠落 -宇宙真理. 欣赏佳作.

白水
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Posted: 2014-11-02 16:59:36 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

喜欢明朗的短制！！远握白水！！

谢谢老师鼓励，问好

白水
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Posted: 2014-11-02 17:02:06 Post subject:

风动 wrote:

一片叶的起飞必然伴随的坠落

-宇宙真理. 欣赏佳作.

起飞的确是需要勇气的 Wink

谢谢鼓励，问好周末

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