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往事如稗草
卧听苍松画黄土
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PostPosted: 2007-05-02 13:50:11    Post subject: 往事如稗草 Reply with quote

一、往事如稗草

沧海有琴
我把低弦寄给你听
让你的日子有些抑扬
岸边开遍花、长满树
记忆弹奏成一座桃花园

雁儿盘旋蓝天
鸣叫打破一些梦
南来的春有些寒
倒春寒
比任何一个冬天还冷

春风一抖
尘埃落了又落
骨子里的疼
在花苞上打颤

谁还在一句句的听
听得风生水起
谁坐在一朵浪花里
等,等那一脉高音
把岁月零落成泥
北方之北长满往事的稗草

二、不想不爱

春天走近的时候
原野盈缀一篮一篮的希望
掀动我的思念
随绿疯长

还记得沈园里的梅花独放
我的傻笑
你的幽默
绿了树、红了鸭

现在却相互缄默成墙
一端是我的悲伤
你踯踌的身影在另一端
从此落寞成疾

难道迈进五月
心仍如止水
我知道,你的想只是一种状态
氤氲成咖啡色飘在心底
我的牵是苦,苦成黄莲

是的,我正滴双眸的泪在掌心
不想、不爱,也要留两手的绿
等一个春又一个春暖花开
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PostPosted: 2007-05-02 13:59:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗意较浓
但不够新
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PostPosted: 2007-05-02 21:04:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

骨子里的疼
在花苞上打颤
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