司马从戎
童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013
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 Posted: 2014-04-16 23:27:40 Post subject: 五律 . 咏荷（六） |
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五律 . 咏荷（六）
司马从戎
玉立江湖上，亭亭天水间。
炎凉何足道，风雨只等闲。
长历无由寂，曾经无比艰。
平生只为洁，碧色是容颜。 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2014-04-18 11:55:37 Post subject: |
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“碧色是容颜”句商榷一下，杨万里的“接天莲叶无穷碧，映日荷花别样红",写接天莲叶之碧，原在衬托映日荷花之红，“红”才是荷
的真容，说“碧色是容颜”就不准确了（荷花以红荷为主，绿荷不多见）。供参考。
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司马从戎
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| Posted: 2014-04-20 22:55:55 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
“碧色是容颜”句商榷一下，杨万里的“接天莲叶无穷碧，映日荷花别样红",写接天莲叶之碧，原在衬托映日荷花之红，“红”才是荷
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谢谢指正! |
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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| Posted: 2014-04-26 15:59:07 Post subject: |
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炎凉何足道，风雨只等闲。——好句。襟怀之咏！
欢迎新朋友！ |
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司马从戎
童生
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| Posted: 2014-05-06 17:19:13 Post subject: |
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| 冰清 wrote: |
炎凉何足道，风雨只等闲。——好句。襟怀之咏！
欢迎新朋友！ |
多谢先生鼓励! |
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冷雨
秀才
Joined: 05 Nov 2010
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| Posted: 2014-05-07 04:11:55 Post subject: |
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| 问好诗友！ |
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