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《浪淘沙 . 回望2013》

秋叶
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Posted: 2014-02-02 05:10:41 Post subject: 《浪淘沙 . 回望2013》

今年奉上一首写实的，以博一粲：《浪淘沙 . 回望2013》感慨忆蛇年，世事如烟。家山远望雾霾连。林立高楼诚信薄，只看金钱。此处亦难眠，风雪连天。满城停电冰花妍。暴雨GO TRAIN困泽国，福祸相联。 GO TRAIN --- 读平声泽，国 --- 入声

晓松
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Posted: 2014-02-02 06:08:48 Post subject:

秋叶兄，新的回望让人耳目一新啊，上阕写国内，下阕写本地。而且不光是古为今用，还洋为中用，把英文嵌入词当中，别具一格，很有创意。不错！ “亿” 当为笔误。

秋叶
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Posted: 2014-02-02 06:20:46 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

秋叶兄，新的回望让人耳目一新啊，上阕写国内，下阕写本地。而且不光是古为今用，还洋为中用，把英文嵌入词当中，别具一格，很有创意。不错！
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谢谢晓松兄赏读和提醒，刚才白水兄也告知该字，已改。
哈哈能搏你们一笑足矣 Laughing

白水
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Posted: 2014-02-02 06:22:18 Post subject:

这次回望好，想笑不敢笑，怕雾霾呛着叫你快改你不改，这不，晓松也看见了吧

qinghongh
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Posted: 2014-02-02 06:25:31 Post subject:

英文入词，有创意！看来这世上难有尽善尽美的桃花源啊。所以陶渊明的那篇文章千古流传。

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Posted: 2014-02-02 20:03:41 Post subject:

问候秋叶兄新年好！国内国外都写到，古为今用，洋为中用，赞！

秋叶
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Posted: 2014-02-06 07:24:22 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

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谢谢白水兄，回去可以带个氧气筒啊 Laughing

秋叶
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Posted: 2014-02-06 07:27:43 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

英文入词，有创意！看来这世上难有尽善尽美的桃花源啊。所以陶渊明的那篇文章千古流传。

庆宏兄说的对，昨天的大雪我量了一下车道，有30多公分厚啊，铲雪手都冻僵了 Sad

秋叶
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Posted: 2014-02-06 07:31:23 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

问候秋叶兄新年好！

国内国外都写到，古为今用，洋为中用，赞！

谢谢笑聊兄赏读，我听到过京剧和粤剧都有用英文唱的，借鉴借鉴罢了 Laughing

黄洋界
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Posted: 2014-02-06 08:46:22 Post subject:

蛇年回望，远忧近愁，祈盼新年，更上层楼。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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