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苦夏
郁雪
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Joined: 26 May 2006
Posts: 25
Location: 河北
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PostPosted: 2006-06-22 17:18:40    Post subject: 苦夏 Reply with quote

苦夏

当繁茂的树叶
遮掩了春梦
浓郁的小草我勾肩搭背
在风中散发太阳的能量的时候
我知道,夏天来了

那一夜,一场雨
在雷声和闪电
轰轰烈烈地造势中
无可挽回地
消失在干裂的大地
和黑色的河水中

青年男女的爱情
也以躁动代替了温柔
戒指在炎热中 霉变

没有希望的憧憬
一次次重现 又一次次蜕变
痛苦,几时才能收起双手
把温馨送给脆弱的心灵
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尹士林
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Joined: 26 May 2006
Posts: 416
Location: 河北保定易县中学
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PostPosted: 2006-06-22 17:24:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

比较喜欢前两节。
赶上中考,这几天冷落了大家,致意!!
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河北易县中学 尹士林
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剑熔
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Posts: 111

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PostPosted: 2006-06-23 04:21:54    Post subject: 感觉...... Reply with quote

问好!我意见再精炼!参考.
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