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好一朵江南茉莉花(外一首)
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PostPosted: 2013-10-05 19:35:52    Post subject: 好一朵江南茉莉花(外一首) Reply with quote

《好一朵江南茉莉花》

喜欢江南女子的人,都喜欢把江南女子比作好一朵江南
茉莉花
可江南女子,自己并不喜欢

因为,茉莉花的风格,太纤细,太素雅
适宜回到宋朝
淡淡暗香,伴着一个弱弱的白面书生,骑驴吟诗咏词而去

或,清风明月之下,吹一支洞箫
结庐
而伫,袅枝柔肠,遥忆千里之外的三郎,何时归还

三月的江南,远峰如黛
更适宜,纤纤玉手,植桃,插桂,栽玫,种牡丹
水载着画舫,随波飘逸,荡漾

江南女子,是水做的骨头,云剪的腰肢,雨洗的梳头
脸似芙蓉眉如柳
怀抱琵琶,半坐在船首,吴语越调唱汴州

春风少一分力
幽幽曲曲的小巷,窗台之上,早已抹去了一滴斑驳的坯漆
跌落的只是,一片小小的花萼



《又见雷峰塔》

美!真美!三月的西湖,花团锦簇,游人如织
清晰的塔影
倒映在碧波荡漾之中,更显得水似明镜,婉如瑶池仙境的一颗宝珠

演绎出一段清明时节细雨纷纷,画舫,艄公,柳岸,长亭
雨中
赠伞,好一个如痴如醉,如胶似漆,如泣如诉,美丽的爱情神话故事

只可惜,人妖终归有别,不能殊途同归,恩爱百年
枉费了白娘子,统帅虾兵蟹将
排山倒海,水漫金山,断肠在断桥之边,丧身在金钵之下

现如今,雷峰塔重屹,青蛇复出
幻化成一阵春风,穿梭于苏堤,平湖,岳庙,鹤林,三潭映月
竟不见,许仙扫墓,许状元哭塔

且听见,塔内阶梯上,笑声,脚步声,纷至沓来
天外天楼上楼
遥指佳肴席上,千年的法海,以如来之身,逃遁坐化于蟹壳之中


注(1):天外天,楼上楼。各为和雷峰塔隔湖相望的杭州百年酒楼。
注(2):法海坐化蟹壳中。为民间传说,扒开螃蟹的肚盖,里面有一塔座形状,就是法海化身。
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Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2013-10-06 08:56:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

寓意,诗意。收放自如
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