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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2013-08-03 15:51:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

真才实学,有意嵌名联韵出,
厚意深情,虚心化蝶入诗来。

再做修改,务必严格按规矩来:

真才实学,有意嵌名联韵出,
厚意深情,难思化蝶入诗来。

再修改:
真才实学,有意嵌名联韵出, 注:学,学问,名词。
美德虚怀,难思贺字入诗来。
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司马从戎
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PostPosted: 2013-08-04 23:20:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读,学习了。
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秋叶
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PostPosted: 2013-08-05 04:32:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
真才实学,有意嵌名联韵出,
...


客气了,切磋而已。
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