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卜算子八首
梅之灵
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PostPosted: 2013-06-24 17:06:00    Post subject: 卜算子八首 Reply with quote

朝看云出岫,暮闻泉水流。潺潺清意濯山涧,飞鸟常聚首。
探花何处见,我与影相怜。化作黄梁枕上梦,终老茂林间。

频书彩笺信,将以寄知音。晓风入袖来复去,几番侵我身。
我身如轻燕,当空舞长衾。红尘世事多悲切,落寞抚瑶琴。

几时相对饮,把盏论古今。弦断难诉离情苦,明月照我心。
我心空自许,无语付黄昏。万缕千丝抒不尽,泪湿衣上襟。

红颜恼芳岁,多情感华年。但愿梦魂长相聚,千载共相惜。
渺渺烟波里,姗姗步影移。寒梅开尽已无花,引我独清寂。

别后清梦影,山水路遥遥。离情千万君知否,梦外天色晓。
惜梅梅不住,感时黯神伤。一夕风过春尚好,可怜花已老。

人寻梅开处。已过梅开时。不知落去向谁边,只独付相思。
惆怅照梳镜,寂寞题新辞。昔日探花今何在,问花知不知?

云外烟霞里,曾闻子规啼。独上秦楼凭栏处,着我旧时衣。
寒梅知春意,早报疏影稀。深谙探花君又去,何日不相离。

憔悴梧桐影,寂寞驿边亭。看却浮生是半醒,凋落春华景。
望帝化羽去,潇湘梦无凭。携手翠薇过巷陌,与我共伤情。
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PostPosted: 2013-06-29 19:02:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏佳作,问好老师。
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PostPosted: 2013-06-29 23:51:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

梅之灵的诗,上来一摞一摞的,这是在练笔哪。很欣赏这种孜孜不倦的精神,继续加油!遥致问候!

还有,卜算子押仄韵:仄仄仄平平,仄仄平平仄,仄仄平平仄仄平,仄仄平平仄。
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PostPosted: 2013-06-30 19:14:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢
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