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好像是夏日黄昏(三首) 投稿请审!

鲁绪刚
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Posted: 2007-04-25 22:50:53 Post subject: 好像是夏日黄昏(三首) 投稿请审!

好像是夏日黄昏（外二首）鲁绪刚好像是夏日黄昏蝉声刚刚退尽周围有青草味一点点潮湿向上抬高着时间我看见身后跑掉的几十年时光落叶一样被许多脚印踩着我才发现自己的弱小小到轻易就可以让大风吹落而此时草尖上的光亮突然消失我看看四周空无一人《坐在树叶上的阳光》从阳光坐在树叶上的时间我计算着一只蝙蝠隐藏的深度再往下面去青草和虫鸣杂乱无章地堆满台阶每上一阶云朵鸟羽雷霆比以前更清晰而我自始至终都无法追赶上一阵风我止住步站在台阶中途栖居在一块岩石后面旁边是一座花园闪电再次敲门内心的悸动浮出了水面语言的碎片完整不了一首诗坐在树叶上的阳光映现了我的苍白和空虚《植物》能有什么呢听鸟鸣把叶子握成拳头在露水里跃跃欲试田畴上踩着风走山坡上掠着草飞那些原本禁锢的现在都一点点释放忘记所有的游戏规则梦可以展开也可以毁灭这一切是多么真实一个人的王国不要薄雾的轻纱不要蚂蚁的声音和暗示抱紧一撮土自由自在地展示自己

金金
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Posted: 2007-04-26 02:03:12 Post subject:

提！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

鲁绪刚
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Posted: 2007-04-26 21:57:18 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

提！

谢谢,握手!

冷水
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Posted: 2007-04-27 01:49:21 Post subject:

还提,提倡这种人与自然自由自在的心态学习 _________________ 越来越蠢

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-04-27 05:13:24 Post subject:

沉稳的诗歌，问好绪刚 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

舒中
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Posted: 2007-04-27 06:55:50 Post subject:

诗韵绵长,问好

千山鸿
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Posted: 2007-04-28 22:50:52 Post subject:

提起来,非常喜欢绪刚诗中的意境 _________________ 北美华人文学社会员欢迎访问《诗友》论坛 http://www.shiyou2006.com

金金
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Posted: 2007-04-29 20:36:15 Post subject:

再提！鲁绪刚兄在艺术效果上的追求很值得学习 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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