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坍塌的网页

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Posted: 2013-06-15 10:13:46 Post subject: 坍塌的网页

坍塌的网页文/ 一无没有了没有了我的一个网页坍塌了那个网页一首小诗写了久久死机了写的是高高的现代如笼的楼房大笼锁小笼楼下的被压得喘着气上头的摘云时摔下来左邻无视隔壁的痛痒右舍的欢笑进入楼下的梦乡伊在伊的顶上方便倒是隔着钢筋的焊网大笼外墙用甲醛涂抹绿色小笼格里塞进万年的放射一条钢丝绳吊着生命的希望绝望自负匆忙～进进出出升升降降忽然卡住了死机了没有备份来不及慌张页面静止了眼前的笼已是遥不可及无需再修改斟酌重启吧与发表再见这就是现代的城市症结吗怎么算是一首好诗 2013-6-16上午修改 2011-07-22上午 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-06-15 15:25:18 Post subject:

现代题材现代感觉。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2013-06-16 08:23:03 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

现代题材现代感觉。

谢谢 William Zhou周道模君赐阅评。
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-06-23 17:37:08 Post subject:

好诗千卷少，知己一人足 _________________ 一亭孤月冷梅花

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Posted: 2013-06-24 09:17:06 Post subject:

梅之灵 wrote:

好诗千卷少，知己一人足

问候诗友。谢谢！
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-06-25 19:44:43 Post subject:

诗词与时俱进。问好

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Posted: 2013-06-27 09:27:33 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

诗词与时俱进。问好

谢谢白水 Moonlight 鼓励。问好！
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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