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卖粮的母亲
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PostPosted: 2013-06-15 09:25:16    Post subject: 卖粮的母亲 Reply with quote

高考刚刚落下帷幕
皱纹沿着母亲苦涩的笑容爬上额头
早起的母亲像热锅上的蚂蚁
扛起一大袋新粮
匆匆走出十里山路
收购点的老板推开店门
迎着年轻的母亲问了声“早”
她僵硬地点点头
扛着粮袋直接站在磅秤上
仿佛焦急着要把自已一起出售出去
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PostPosted: 2013-06-15 09:28:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

"她僵硬地点点头
扛着粮袋直接站在磅秤上
仿佛焦急着要把自已一起出售出去"
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名心退尽道心生,如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足,好诗不过近人情。

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姚阳辉
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PostPosted: 2013-06-16 08:50:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

一无 wrote:
"她僵硬地点点头
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谢谢点评!请多指点,问好!
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