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《心灵的合影》（外一首）

姚阳辉
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Posted: 2013-06-14 10:08:00 Post subject: 《心灵的合影》（外一首）

《心灵的合影》酷似知了的羽翼我远远地看着愿望塔薄薄的蝉鸣举起相机想拍下一帘风景打开的镜头里我站在我的对面，双手正握着相机心爱的宝贝走了过来紧紧地挨着我一只手搭在我的肩上穿过对面我透明的身躯我清晰地看见高高耸立的愿望塔下一股暖流早已抵达心灵的海岸沸腾的潮汐正在汹涌我迅速按下时间的快门，把一个瞬间收藏进永恒《愿望塔》愿望的高度超过塔身的预期站在高大挺拔的塔下，我的身躯显得过于渺小渺小的身躯陷进塔的影子怀揣已久的愿望不敢轻易捧出，我数着一节一节攀高的愿望突然发现一只蜗牛正在艰难地向上爬行爬着爬着，蜗牛的脚下滑了一下一场不大不下的惊吓，扭伤了愿望的腰肢

李庆贺
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Posted: 2013-06-14 15:52:08 Post subject:

沸腾的潮汐正在汹涌我迅速按下时间的快门，把一个瞬间收藏进永恒有感悟，灵动的诗文，欣赏，问候

姚阳辉
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Posted: 2013-06-14 21:31:31 Post subject:

李庆贺 wrote:

沸腾的潮汐正在汹涌
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谢谢点评！周末快乐！

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