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一只羊和草原出现裂痕(四首)
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PostPosted: 2013-05-22 13:03:05    Post subject: 一只羊和草原出现裂痕(四首) Reply with quote

一只羊和草原出现裂痕(四首)

吴春山

一只羊和草原出现裂痕

草原陌生,芳草温顺
一只羊在跋涉,它试图穿越这空蒙的旷野

照见尘世的小溪旁
羊看见自己的影子露出病相
——远处传来诵经声
它和传说中的狼,隔着一个缺席的季节

一只羊和草原出现裂痕
那些迷失方向的风,趁机钻进缝隙
在狼群抵达之前
咀嚼一只羊的过往


火车慢下来

一个毫无新意的早晨
大地上,一列火车呼啸而过
沿途的山川、河流、草木、村庄排列陈旧
面色冷峻,纷纷隐退
仿佛听到了时间迸裂的声音

前方是小站,火车慢下来了
慢下来的火车
用一块冷峻的铁皮和喘息
跟一群灰头土脸的人
在尘土飞扬的路旁,交谈旅程……


月 光

月光静谧
月光照见大地上一切褪色的事物
月光安抚了一些浮躁的想法和透支的纯净时光
童年曾长出翅膀
昨夜的梦里,乌鸦点燃炉火
陌生的小兽在温暖中练习飞翔

站在缓坡上,背影孤独
背影常常在夜色中窥见蚂蚁咬伤月亮
月亮露出缺口
有淡淡的忧伤溢出,像经年的月光


鸟之死

零乱的夜色
房间里响起疲惫的音乐
空气中忽然传来鸟死亡的消息

远山飘浮,在城市森林
鸟承受了太多的谎言
一些枝丫,被迷茫的胃砍下头颅
鸟找不到栖息的地方
当村庄留下一双干瘪的乳房
鸟死在返家的路上

鸟的死亡,让天空
露出一个黑色的破绽
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PostPosted: 2013-05-22 13:57:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

一只羊和草原出现裂痕

草原陌生,芳草温顺
一只羊在跋涉,它试图穿越这空蒙的旷野

照见尘世的小溪旁
羊看见自己的影子露出病相
——远处传来诵经声
它和传说中的狼,隔着一个缺席的季节

一只羊和草原出现裂痕
那些迷失方向的风,趁机钻进缝隙
在狼群抵达之前
咀嚼一只羊的过往

——这个可以归为寓言手法!学习!!
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PostPosted: 2013-05-22 14:01:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

鸟之死

零乱的夜色
房间里响起疲惫的音乐
空气中忽然传来鸟死亡的消息

远山飘浮,在城市森林
鸟承受了太多的谎言
一些枝丫,被迷茫的胃砍下头颅
鸟找不到栖息的地方
当村庄留下一双干瘪的乳房
鸟死在返家的路上

鸟的死亡,让天空
露出一个黑色的破绽

——这个也是!!
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PostPosted: 2013-05-23 09:27:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

“慢下来的火车
用一块冷峻的铁皮和喘息
跟一群灰头土脸的人
在尘土飞扬的路旁,交谈旅程…… ”

诗句。
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吴春山
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PostPosted: 2013-05-23 15:43:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
一只羊和草原出现裂痕
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问好家乡老师,请多指导!
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吴春山
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PostPosted: 2013-05-23 15:43:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

一无 wrote:
“慢下来的火车
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问好诗友,谢谢提读!
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