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生活在别处(短诗三首)
寇宝昌
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Joined: 30 Apr 2013
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Location: 中国黑龙江
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PostPosted: 2013-05-12 13:13:36    Post subject: 生活在别处(短诗三首) Reply with quote

生活在别处

远行的愿望
矗立成生命枪管上的准星
我瞄准整个世界
扣动扳机
哪怕是一记意外的走火
也要 让那枚沉抑已久的念头
冲出枪膛




谢幕

大风的夜里
树,正求饶般抽搐着身子
庭院里躺满叶子的尸体
我知道
我,还要
为一个枯黄的约定
虚掩门庭



突围

压抑太久
需要狂奔和逃逸
像暖瓶里弹起木塞的气浪
我,也要为自己
踢开一扇门




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梅树林
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Joined: 11 May 2013
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Location: 中国上海(暂住)
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PostPosted: 2013-05-12 13:19:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

轻松。他写好这组诗,一定心情轻松。
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做简单的人,写些简单的诗,过简单的生活!
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李庆贺
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Joined: 22 Feb 2013
Posts: 180

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PostPosted: 2013-05-12 19:21:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

哪怕是一记意外的走火
也要 让那枚沉抑已久的念头
冲出枪膛

自然,凝练!
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