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我把整个春天送给你
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PostPosted: 2013-05-07 12:29:09    Post subject: 我把整个春天送给你 Reply with quote

我把整个春天送给你

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我等待着你眉间渐浓的星光被春风轻易地打开
你为了拥有春天放弃自己孤寂的宫殿 到处寻找春的踪影
你清澈的眸光流转着春的气息
淙淙的足迹溢满春的想象

我等待着你眉间渐浓的星光被春风轻易地打开
你那多情的歌喉在声嘶力竭的为春天歌唱
直到夜晚 你的歌喉再也发不出一丝声响
可你仍然不肯放弃望着群星歌唱
你在用心灵歌唱
你努力把星光聚集在你的眉间
你的心声透过渐浓的星光在夜幕里无限嘹亮
残冬的冰雪被你嘹亮的心声消融
涓涓的溪流注入大地的血管
积蓄一冬的生机即将起程

我等待着你眉间渐浓的星光被春风轻易地打开
我把整个春天送给你
我要你成为最美丽的新娘
整个春天就是你的嫁妆
你生命的花蕾会在春天怒放
你灿烂的笑脸陶醉整个春天
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PostPosted: 2013-05-08 13:17:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

分节的散文诗。
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PostPosted: 2013-05-08 19:50:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
分节的散文诗。


多谢 老师临帖指导 问好 !重发一下 呵呵
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PostPosted: 2013-05-12 23:35:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

你送我春天,我赠你生命怒放
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PostPosted: 2013-05-20 22:45:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

远狼 wrote:
你送我春天,我赠你生命怒放

多谢 临帖支持 问好 !
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