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你我在十二点钟相逢 (原创新诗)
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PostPosted: 2013-05-03 05:37:29    Post subject: 你我在十二点钟相逢 (原创新诗) Reply with quote

你我在十二点钟相逢



我想留住闪电
让他一片森林慢慢在岁月中老去


倦鸟继续飞行
森林充满恐惧的气息


拔地而起是参天大树
在无光的世界更显得鬼魅


人把自己囚禁在这里
无法呼吸自然的空气


虽然都有各自的路径
请你务必记记记记住


我们的起点就是我们的归宿
你我在十二点钟相逢
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PostPosted: 2013-05-03 18:25:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

有些朦胧。
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PostPosted: 2013-05-03 21:33:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

我们的起点就是我们的归宿
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PostPosted: 2013-05-03 22:19:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢光临,欢迎指导。
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