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站立的镜子
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PostPosted: 2013-05-01 11:14:31    Post subject: 站立的镜子 Reply with quote
在灵魂荒芜的路口
我等待了很久。一动不动地
站着，站成一面镜子

一朵云，有意无意划了过来
像蚂蚁在影子里爬来爬去
像春蚕一丝一丝吞食心灵的叶子

偶然，我期待云停下脚步
对着镜子梳梳头，或者理理妆
云却摘下一片夜色

漆黑的夜色很柔软，像搭在
沙发上睡衣的寂寞
厚厚的寂寞踩住了沉闷的呼吸

没有雷达灵敏的触角，镜子
无法锁定云游弋的思绪
走街窜巷的风也没透露一点消息
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PostPosted: 2013-05-01 11:36:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
像春蚕一丝一丝吞食心灵的叶子

春蚕是如何吞食心灵的叶子？
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PostPosted: 2013-05-01 12:59:29    Post subject: Reply with quote
学习，镜子里的另一个自己也别有情趣！问好
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PostPosted: 2013-05-01 14:18:45    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
像春蚕一丝一丝吞食心灵的叶子

春蚕是如何吞食心灵的叶子？
谢谢！问好！
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PostPosted: 2013-05-01 14:19:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
李庆贺 wrote:
学习，镜子里的另一个自己也别有情趣！问好
谢谢点评！请多批评，问好诗友！
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PostPosted: 2013-05-01 14:21:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
欣赏。问候阳辉！
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PostPosted: 2013-05-01 17:06:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
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欣赏。问候阳辉！
谢谢！问好诗友！
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PostPosted: 2013-05-01 17:18:06    Post subject: Reply with quote
有点干涩
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PostPosted: 2013-05-02 08:08:16    Post subject: Reply with quote
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有点干涩
谢谢指点，问好！
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