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雅安,安好
枫桥夜泊
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PostPosted: 2013-04-23 13:24:25    Post subject: 雅安,安好 Reply with quote

我曾目睹过你的风采
你的风采芳华四溢
如你的名字般美丽

雅安:让我轻轻揽你入怀
在这人间四月花芬芳的季节
老天分明嫉妒你容颜姣好
趁你美人醉卧将醒未醒
放出恶魔毁你容貌伤你玉体
让花容月貌的你 受尽蹂躏
撕裂的伤口呵 噩梦惊心
一处叫芦山,一处叫宝兴,一处
叫天全……

雅安:让我轻轻揽你入怀
为你整容疗伤 借力发功
用雅鱼作滋补恢复元气
用雅雨天天为你沐浴净身
雅女们替你梳妆打扮
雅男们从那一刻起
把你当心中女神
相信我,你不复再受伤害
“你若安好,便是晴天”

雅安,那时的你
将更加地美丽
惊艳于世

(作于4月23日夜)
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PostPosted: 2013-04-23 17:20:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

雅安,那时的你
将更加地美丽
惊艳于世
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枫桥夜泊
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PostPosted: 2013-04-23 23:32:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

chenrunmin wrote:
雅安,那时的你
将更加地美丽
惊艳于世

谢谢您的阅读!
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PostPosted: 2013-04-24 10:50:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

枫桥夜泊先生,一定对雅安风土民情很熟悉了解。说了好些一般人不知道雅安民俗特色。

兄台之诗,写的很浪漫凄艳。别致!
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枫桥夜泊
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PostPosted: 2013-04-28 00:36:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

司马策风 wrote:
枫桥夜泊先生,一定对雅安风土民情很熟悉了解。说了好些一般人不知道雅安民俗特色。
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谢谢司马兄台首肯和鞭策!雅安风土民情,不敢说很熟悉,只是去过多次,印象深刻——这是一个美丽的地方,以“三雅”闻名遐迩,曰雅鱼,青衣江特产,头部有一长骨,形似剑,味美鲜嫩,民间有“到雅安不食雅鱼枉来一趟”之说;曰雅雨,雅安多雨,气候湿润,谓之“雨城”;曰雅女,自然指女性,受气候、美食乃至独特的地域文化熏染,这里的女性别有风情,具有天然的美丽……老天施威,胡不垂青雅安!有感于此次“4.20”地震,遂赋诗一首(另,地震初始作另首《芦山,今夜不寂寞》,就两首而言,《雅安,安好》余甚为满意),祈愿雅安尽快站立起来,“…更加地美丽╱惊艳于世”。希望兄台有机会去雅安,领略彼地独特的风土人情!
4月29日,迟复为歉
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