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请别动我的零乱（外一首）

特父
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Posted: 2013-04-17 10:29:29 Post subject: 请别动我的零乱（外一首）

请别动我的零乱（外一首） □中国重庆特父那是内在的摆放自有其因果秩序请拿开你的嘴你的手你的诧异的目光风不是你吹的雨不是你下的满地的落叶与你无关你看见枝桠就好看见新芽就好至于我的那些零乱风来风去自有风的归宿打紧的是我们彼此的调理阳光发自内心请别动我的零乱让时光慢慢梳理我被囚在时间的笼子里准点起床准点出操准点吃饭准点睡觉洗漱5分钟做爱10分钟我被囚在时间的笼子里发条控制着身体的零部件 45度踢腿 90度弯腰 30码行走 180度转身朝九晚五我被囚在时间的笼子里皮薄膘厚骨质酥松分享0 收藏0 邀请

山城子
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Posted: 2013-04-17 16:45:04 Post subject:

风不是你吹的雨不是你下的满地的落叶与你无关你看见枝桠就好看见新芽就好 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

远狼
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Posted: 2013-04-18 01:40:38 Post subject:

自有其因果秩序这句有点多了，老乡以为呢？ _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

白水
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Posted: 2013-04-19 08:00:31 Post subject:

我被囚在时间的笼子里准点起床准点出操准点吃饭准点睡觉洗漱5分钟做爱10分钟我被囚在时间的笼子里发条控制着身体的零部件 45度踢腿 90度弯腰 30码行走 180度转身朝九晚五我被囚在时间的笼子里皮薄膘厚骨质酥松分享0 收藏0 邀请特色之作，谢谢分享

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2013-04-20 18:53:35 Post subject:

最后一首比较喜欢。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

特父
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Posted: 2013-04-22 11:17:51 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

风不是你吹的
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问安！多批！

特父
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Posted: 2013-04-22 11:18:17 Post subject:

远狼 wrote:

自有其因果秩序这句有点多了，老乡以为呢？

谢谢老乡来读！

特父
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Posted: 2013-04-22 11:18:45 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

我被囚在时间的笼子里
...

问安！沏茶！

特父
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Posted: 2013-04-22 11:19:13 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

最后一首比较喜欢。

问安！敬茶！

一无
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Posted: 2013-04-23 09:46:17 Post subject:

“45度踢腿 90度弯腰 30码行走 180度转身朝九晚五 ” _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

枫桥夜泊
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Posted: 2013-04-23 13:38:45 Post subject:

“我被囚在时间的笼子里” ——有味道 _________________ 诗歌可以使人理性，时时不忘作人良知。

特父
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Posted: 2013-04-25 14:12:40 Post subject:

一无 wrote:

“45度踢腿
90度弯腰
30码行走
180度转身
朝九
晚五 ”

问安！

特父
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Posted: 2013-04-25 14:13:17 Post subject:

枫桥夜泊 wrote:

“我被囚在时间的笼子里”
——有味道

远握！

宝塔山人
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Posted: 2013-04-25 17:01:20 Post subject:

至于我的那些零乱风来风去自有风的归宿打紧的是我们彼此的调理阳光发自内心问好朋友

风动
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Posted: 2013-04-27 21:28:35 Post subject:

请别动我的零乱－很别致。欣赏。

特父
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Posted: 2013-05-01 14:33:25 Post subject:

宝塔山人 wrote:

至于我的那些零乱
...

问安！远握！

特父
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Posted: 2013-05-01 14:34:01 Post subject:

风动 wrote:

请别动我的零乱

－很别致。欣赏。

问安！多批！

SLIU
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Posted: 2013-05-02 10:17:02 Post subject:

“那是内在的摆放自有其因果秩序 ” 感觉凌乱，只是没找出规律。。开脱。。哲理。。

特父
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Posted: 2013-05-05 16:58:33 Post subject:

SLIU wrote:

“那是内在的摆放自有其因果秩序 ”
...

谢批！远握！

特父
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Posted: 2013-05-13 11:22:41 Post subject:

枫桥夜泊 wrote:

“我被囚在时间的笼子里”
——有味道

问好！多批！

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