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列夫．托尔斯泰出走

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2013-03-29 11:03:21 Post subject: 列夫．托尔斯泰出走

列夫．托尔斯泰出走 1910年11月10日列夫举着红烛出走冬天的风猛吹他的嘴巴和头颅飘扬起皑皑白雪在俄罗斯的凌晨三点列夫把伯爵留在家里他着农民的白衣衫和粗糙的靴子独自走出自家的大门他驾着马车一路向前远处传来狗吠他粗糙的大手一面紧揽缰绳一面高举烛火他看到上帝的星星随他异动他兴奋的大叫一声： ——嚯，我的上帝！我们同行！他幸福异常村庄的呼吸让他觉得春天的温暖他忽然可怜起马儿来了那种爱情一样强烈的怜悯使他决定寻找火车他来到附近的一个微不足道的火车小站他突然打了一个阿嚏很快又打了一个当他打了第三个阿嚏的时候他发现手中的烛火忽然发蓝蓝莹莹的一尘不染他的脖子开始柔顺硕大头颅像成熟的谷穗那样一点点的下垂他顺着脖子往下看他生动的看到一大片星海春花一样覆满了大地列夫萌生出去床上躺一躺的想法他问自己是不是累了很快他回答自己是累了他真是累极了他的眼皮树皮一样的黏在一起他困倦的厉害他躺下去了他躺在了春花般的星光之中 2013/3/29 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

风墙
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Posted: 2013-03-29 11:14:18 Post subject:

浪漫！ _________________ 墙漏风了

hepingdao
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Posted: 2013-03-29 11:21:31 Post subject:

生动：他的脖子开始柔顺硕大头颅像成熟的谷穗那样一点点的下垂他顺着脖子往下看他生动的看到一大片星海春花一样覆满了大地 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-29 11:59:13 Post subject:

很有形象的一首！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

白水
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Posted: 2013-03-29 12:14:44 Post subject:

细腻，生动

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2013-03-29 14:28:51 Post subject:

谢谢诸位的表扬。昨天听了一支特别好的歌曲，然后看了托翁的生平，突然感动，写了出来，今天早上又改了改。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

冷巉
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Posted: 2013-03-30 22:39:46 Post subject:

列夫萌生出去床上躺一躺的想法读完你的诗我也去床上躺上一躺 _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2013-03-31 16:20:08 Post subject: 。

冷巉 wrote:

列夫萌生出去床上躺一躺的想法

读完你的诗

我也去床上躺上一躺

很舒服的
_________________
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汪有榕
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Posted: 2013-03-31 17:19:42 Post subject:

他躺下去了他躺在了春花般的星光之中 _________________ 悠游的世界,美梦何其多? http://blog.sina.com.cn/wangyourong

山东二黑
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Posted: 2013-03-31 20:09:00 Post subject:

叙述流畅，细节动人，稍微啰嗦点

远狼
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Posted: 2013-04-01 09:51:02 Post subject:

感觉想法没出来 _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2013-04-04 09:17:13 Post subject:

问好汪有榕，二黑和远狼。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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