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潮水(外一首)
枫桥夜泊
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PostPosted: 2013-03-25 02:08:38    Post subject: 潮水(外一首) Reply with quote

潮 水(外一首)

出门,便遇见一街的潮水向我
袭来。我看见暗夜的暗,布下口袋
迷魂阵:影影绰绰形成包抄,
对潮水各个击破围追堵截;

我还看见,潮水以秋风扫落叶
之势:扫过大大小小路口,扫过
高中低档形形色色汽车,收拢
男男女女老老少少的脚步。那
满街的潮水,前不见头后不见尾。

流浪汉

花坛边树枝下的这块地方:是他的领地,
已驻扎很久。陌生人,求求你,不要驱赶他!
夜晚,不妨碍什么,也不影响市容。

昨夜才下场冬雨,挺大;黎明时终于停了。
湿漉漉的被窝,此刻,正做着梦——
梦里,咀嚼着饥饿赶走了寒冷……
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枫桥夜泊
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PostPosted: 2013-03-25 02:14:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

初来乍到,请朋友们多挑刺少飘扬(四川方言,表扬之意)!枫桥夜泊在此稽首了
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PostPosted: 2013-03-25 11:41:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

以前一个网友叫枫桥夜泊,后来走散了、、、欣赏美诗。。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-25 14:46:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

过誉了。还望朋友指出不足!
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