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一个女人
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PostPosted: 2013-03-15 18:37:05    Post subject: 一个女人 Reply with quote

一个女人
眼大就好
其实她的女儿眼睛更无邪
她和女儿都含笑
躲在两只羊羔后面
拍照

一个女人
嘴大就好,她偏偏
还做出吞月亮的模样
她拍的照片
一半是忍俊不禁,一半
皓齿毕现

一个女人
坐着就好,她偏偏
坐在南方的大树下,树根实在粗
坐在独石上(平野的一块石头)
就像坐在
她的家中

一个女人
优雅就好,她偏偏
将内在的优雅型化成很多种姿态
她在公司晚会上跳舞
她是风暴眼
舞成一面面的旗子

一个女人
不俗就好,她偏偏
心血来潮,解构豹子的生活,爬上
百年大树
她把她的腿并在树的肩上
沿着树杈
笔直向上

一个女人乐观就好
一个女人幸福就好
她却常常想不起自己早已寡居
每天起床的时候,也唤一声
帘外的人起床
她是一个会写诗的女人
她把大家的太阳
看作一个人的老公
2013/3/16
注:看了朋友空间的照片,即兴成字。

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PostPosted: 2013-03-15 21:18:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

让我不由的想起了姜文电影<太阳照常升起>里那个疯疯癫癫的女人,呵呵
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PostPosted: 2013-03-16 06:53:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

口语化的调侃。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-16 07:01:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

吴端择 wrote:
让我不由的想起了姜文电影<太阳照常升起>里那个疯疯癫癫的女人,呵呵

看来我和姜文有共同的审美。哈哈,问好。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-16 07:03:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
口语化的调侃。

谢谢。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-16 09:40:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

她把她的腿并在树的肩上
沿着树杈
笔直向上

女人的思维与众不同
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PostPosted: 2013-03-16 10:41:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
她把她的腿并在树的肩上
沿着树杈
笔直向上

女人的思维与众不同


感觉还是这类的女人给人生活情趣,总能给平淡的生活创造新意。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-16 20:57:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

好一个 一个女人
好诗,有后劲 有回味,新鲜感十足,有感染力,感觉很有味的,欣赏,学习,问好.
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PostPosted: 2013-03-17 06:30:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

chenrunmin wrote:
好一个 一个女人
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谢谢,关键还是人好,活泼,优雅,知情,乐观、会生活的女人,令人赏心悦目。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-19 09:49:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

读到“一个女人 不俗就好”这一节实在忍俊不止笑了起来——这女子顽皮得......
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PostPosted: 2013-03-19 17:52:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

远狼 wrote:
读到“一个女人 不俗就好”这一节实在忍俊不止笑了起来——这女子顽皮得......

有2节还不错,有的仍不满意。问好。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-20 14:15:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

一直都觉得女人个特别有意思的意象,但她那么多面多变,对于男人而言,总有不能了解的一面。好奇的的是作者的年龄,年轻人一般很难写好女人,当然,女诗人除外
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PostPosted: 2013-03-20 22:42:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

守墓人笔记 wrote:
一直都觉得女人个特别有意思的意象,但她那么多面多变,对于男人而言,总有不能了解的一面。好奇的的是作者的年龄,年轻人一般很难写好女人,当然,女诗人除外

速成,也可以看做一篇随笔。谢谢。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-21 21:51:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

女人都是百变的,不变的女人是别人眼里女人,女人心中的自己永远新奇且富有诗意。
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