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七律·春山畅想

莹雪
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Posted: 2013-03-13 16:55:18 Post subject: 七律·春山畅想

雨过峰峦碧水流，风和暖日照花幽。欣然笛曲逍遥奏，自得牛音缓步游。水墨留文书丽句，丹青入韵展怀悠。江南锦绣群芳好，塞北烟云百草柔。

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2013-03-13 21:46:46 Post subject:

支持水墨留文，丹青入韵 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

qinghongh
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Posted: 2013-03-14 05:25:49 Post subject:

水墨笛曲，牛音丹青。。。诗，曲，书，画都有了，悠然得很啊！

莹雪
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Posted: 2013-03-14 08:01:21 Post subject:

影沉寒水 wrote:

支持

水墨留文，丹青入韵

谢谢关注！

莹雪
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Posted: 2013-03-14 08:03:07 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

水墨笛曲，牛音丹青。。。

诗，曲，书，画都有了，悠然得很啊！

谢谢qinghongGG点评！问好

黄洋界
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Posted: 2013-03-14 09:32:27 Post subject:

春山畅想，胸襟博大，视野开阔。欣赏！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

莹雪
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Posted: 2013-03-14 10:28:59 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

春山畅想，胸襟博大，视野开阔。欣赏！

谢谢黄老师点评！问好

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-03-14 16:05:01 Post subject:

笛曲逍遥，牛音缓步；水墨留文，丹青入韵。好一幅江南水乡放牧图！

莹雪
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Posted: 2013-03-14 16:48:21 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

笛曲逍遥，牛音缓步；水墨留文，丹青入韵。

好一幅江南水乡放牧图！

谢谢笑卿兄点评！

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Posted: 2013-03-20 05:46:44 Post subject:

意景清新，笔墨芬芳！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

莹雪
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Posted: 2013-03-21 14:30:18 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

意景清新，笔墨芬芳！

谢谢您点评关注！问好

七夜
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Posted: 2013-03-21 15:29:16 Post subject:

雨过流峰碧，风暖照花幽。笛遥欣然奏，牛音缓步游。水墨留书丽，丹青展怀悠。江南群芳好，烟云百草柔。

冷雨
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Posted: 2013-03-28 16:17:47 Post subject:

问好莹雪老师！

莹雪
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Posted: 2013-03-29 13:47:58 Post subject:

冷雨 wrote:

问好莹雪老师！

冷雨周末快乐！

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Posted: 2013-03-31 02:04:14 Post subject:

雨过峰峦碧水流，风和暖日照花幽。起得很妙！

莹雪
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Posted: 2013-04-04 17:05:27 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

雨过峰峦碧水流，风和暖日照花幽。
起得很妙！

谢谢您的关注与点评！

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Posted: 2013-04-05 01:19:50 Post subject:

欣然笛曲逍遥奏，自得牛音缓步游。自得牛音缓步游。情韵清悠，自得其乐！妙！

莹雪
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Posted: 2013-04-05 08:02:18 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

欣然笛曲逍遥奏，自得牛音缓步游。
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谢谢冰清老师关注与点评！

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Posted: 2013-04-05 09:54:21 Post subject:

再读。 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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