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绰号“老农民”

山城子
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Posted: 2013-01-31 18:49:54 Post subject: 绰号“老农民”

绰号“老农民” ——校园系列叙事[1] 文/ 山城子 1、捏疼粉笔三年，方知阴影处的旧闻花儿草儿课间戏谑时称他为老农民农味、农道儿、农气、农息。八岁划出一块地儿种甜杆儿-嚼；种西红柿-吃；种香香的看瓜-闻 2、他走不进那些厚厚的参考或规范凡事随意、随便、随缘。学分段，就让主题搁浅天天的自由活动，今儿个这山，明儿个那山集合，时有小鸟先飞，立马一脚踢翻 3、不讲穿着，不修边幅，只盯着自己的庄稼有的像玉米，有的像高粱，有的像葵花教室里好像青纱帐，读书声沙拉沙拉、沙拉沙拉心中有风徐徐地刮，他很惬意地迎风溜哒 2013-2-1于黔 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

白水
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Posted: 2013-02-01 10:35:04 Post subject:

老师这是自画像吗，很惬意，很潇洒

许登彦
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Posted: 2013-02-01 11:49:31 Post subject:

山城子老师：您好！好久不见，挺想你。这组诗将两个常态景致充分的结合起来，写出了生活的情趣，不错，耐人寻味。 _________________ 许登彦

山城子
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Posted: 2013-02-01 18:54:28 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

老师这是自画像吗，很惬意，很潇洒

是的，用了第三人称。
——预祝白水新春快乐吉祥！！
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山城子
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Posted: 2013-02-01 18:56:15 Post subject:

许登彦 wrote:

山城子老师：
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谢谢许登彦简评！！亲亲地握手！！新春愉快！！
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上城
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Posted: 2013-02-02 13:47:22 Post subject:

老农民好啊。我很想回家做个年轻的农民。 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

金金
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Posted: 2013-02-02 14:31:35 Post subject:

很像老师的风骨 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

山城子
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Posted: 2013-02-02 18:54:54 Post subject:

上城 wrote:

老农民好啊。我很想回家做个年轻的农民。

上城新春愉快！！
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山城子
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Posted: 2013-02-02 18:56:16 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

很像老师的风骨

昔日生涯的纪实！金金新春快乐！！！
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