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绝句-江南水乡诗一组

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-01-12 08:50:16 Post subject: 绝句-江南水乡诗一组

文/笑聊五绝—烟雨江南五湖烟雨里，杨柳荡春风。驻足长观望，远山凫水东？五绝—南禅寺一瞥钟声才响彻，佛号又悠扬。善念须心起，言行作表彰。五绝—江南春光柳絮漫天飞，翩翩蝶舞晖。牧童哼俚曲，步履惹春菲。五绝-水乡荷塘翠裙颜粉艳，锦鲤水中游。白鹭探鱼食，鸣蝉响柳头。五绝—惠山古镇秋色晨钟声远去，暮鼓响山中。枫叶红如火，蛩吟起北风。五绝—梅园凌厉北风冷，暖阳还未佳。唯存香雪海，乘机扑人怀。

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Posted: 2013-01-12 09:36:54 Post subject:

几乎全用白描手法，呈现出一组很美的江南水乡诗，欣赏！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2013-01-12 09:46:25 Post subject:

绝句秀江南，水乡入画间。

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-01-14 08:32:57 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

几乎全用白描手法，呈现出一组很美的江南水乡诗，欣赏！

问候黄老！谢谢赏评鼓励！

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-01-14 08:33:50 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

绝句秀江南，水乡入画间。

庆宏兄好！谢谢赏评鼓励！

莹雪
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Posted: 2013-01-14 08:56:54 Post subject:

欣赏“江南水乡”诗意优雅

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-01-14 09:05:17 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

欣赏“江南水乡”诗意优雅

问好！谢谢赏评鼓励！

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-01-17 07:08:18 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

文/笑聊
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写景佳作，甚妙！

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-01-17 19:30:22 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

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写景佳作，甚妙！

谢谢秋叶兄赏读雅评鼓励！

连南河
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Posted: 2013-01-26 02:25:51 Post subject:

“晨钟声远去，暮鼓响山中。”意蕴悠长，问候诗友！ _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

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Posted: 2013-01-30 20:34:34 Post subject:

连南河 wrote:

“晨钟声远去，暮鼓响山中。”意蕴悠长，问候诗友！

问候诗友！谢谢赏读点评！

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