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美人鱼
青洋
秀才


Joined: 25 Sep 2012
Posts: 342
Location: 溫哥華
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PostPosted: 2012-12-22 04:09:07    Post subject: 美人鱼 Reply with quote

美人鱼


把粘著海藻的幻想
從金髮上一一梳去
從此,再沒有羅曼蒂克的嚮往
對某顆星星的愛,
在太空的魔鏡中無言墜落
無處藏身的傷痛
在身後
燃燒起一道眩目的火光

一件件摘下
虛偽的頭飾
一條條剝下緊緊纏繞的
錦繡花邊
你本是一條自由的魚
用不著,再用不著偽裝
讓周身破碎的鱗片
最後一次,閃爍
真金的輝煌

當晨曦的第一束光線
刺穿謊言
無知的朝霞
把鮮血鋪向海面
你勘破紅塵的微笑
淡淡地,猶如拂曉殘月
是魚,不能一次次原諒
人的背叛
是魚,不能為一塊冷酷的頑石
放棄大海
深深的悲哀沉入深深的海底
絕望揚起龍捲風
托舉起九萬里鯤鵬

離開
連同貝殼裏驚醒的夢
化作一堆泡沫
純粹
潔白

平靜的海面
正醞釀一場海嘯
覆地翻天
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子在川上曰
举人


Joined: 18 Nov 2009
Posts: 1314

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PostPosted: 2012-12-22 20:30:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

平靜的海面
正醞釀一場海嘯
覆地翻天

这是生活的希望和亮色。
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冷雨
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Joined: 05 Nov 2010
Posts: 439

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PostPosted: 2013-01-01 09:54:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好青洋老师!新年快乐!
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chenrunmin
进士出身


Joined: 21 Nov 2009
Posts: 2427
Location: nanjing.jiangsu.china.
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PostPosted: 2013-01-01 18:56:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

有意境,有感觉,感觉很美的,欣赏,学习,问好.
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金金
进士出身


Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
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PostPosted: 2013-01-08 11:08:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

很规矩,恍有杜甫和莎士比亚的雕塑像一样的结构内容。但是否也有八股的嫌疑?
一家言。
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