青洋
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看你，看月色中的荷塘
看一輪薄冰溶在清麗的荷葉臉上
看那朵粉紅開出藕的遐想
輕輕
激情濺起水花
變成小魚
羞怯，一頭紮進水裏躲藏
看徐徐涼風撩起田田裙邊
看冉冉螢火舉起盞盞燈光
看你將要凋殘還未凋殘的美
令人窒息的痛
在一瞥之中
釋放
2012-11-13
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2012-11-13 08:05:58 Post subject: |
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美仑美奂,令人动容
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金金
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Joined: 08 Feb 2007
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冷雨
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| Posted: 2012-11-13 19:26:42 Post subject: |
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| 问好青洋老师！燎人心间，向往！ |
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青洋
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| Posted: 2012-11-14 02:35:26 Post subject: |
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謝謝各位詩人來評，問好冷雨。
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