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七绝《重阳》问好各位师友重阳节愉快

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白水
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Posted: 2012-10-29 06:50:25 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

接白水七绝《重阳》〝风声谈笑任红黄〞赋诗一首：
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问好老师，真高兴又读到你的诗歌 Very Happy

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Posted: 2012-10-29 06:53:16 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

喜迎白云老师归来，接一首：
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博士好快手
再谢你的电话
Very Happy

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Posted: 2012-10-29 08:28:49 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

喜迎白云老师归来，接一首：
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博士好快手
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这里有黄老师，冰清老师和白云老师等几位老前辈真好！

这使我想起曹操和叶帅的诗句：

老骥伏枥，志在千里

满目青山夕照明

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Posted: 2012-10-29 11:28:29 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

欣赏佳作。
偶又好几天上不来。5555555 Crying or Very sad

今天终于进来了

问好mm,等你新作

JJ好！好的。那我就先发一首；
　　　　　《感九日后》
重阳过后叶金黄，浅唱微吟醉咏觞。
细雨淋窗书墨趣，轻风扑面带诗芳。

余下的，稍后再补。 Wink

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Posted: 2012-10-30 04:44:59 Post subject:

輕风扑面帶诗芳 - 很美的诗句！問好莹雪！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2012-10-30 11:25:23 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

輕风扑面帶诗芳 - 很美的诗句！
問好莹雪！

謝謝白雲點評！
問好白雲！

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Posted: 2012-10-31 05:34:25 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

喜迎白云老师归来，接一首：
...

博士好快手
...

这里有黄老师，冰清老师和白云老师等几位老前辈真好！

这使我想起曹操和叶帅的诗句：

老骥伏枥，志在千里

满目青山夕照明
...

你说得是，从他们身上学到很多很多。

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Posted: 2012-10-31 05:36:39 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

欣赏佳作。
偶又好几天上不来。5555555 Crying or Very sad

今天终于进来了

问好mm,等你新作

JJ好！好的。那我就先发一首；

　　　　　《感九日后》
重阳过后叶金黄，浅唱微吟醉咏觞。
细雨淋窗书墨趣，轻风扑面带诗芳。

余下的，稍后再补。　　　　　
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MM好诗，很有韵味，等你的“补” Very Happy

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Posted: 2012-10-31 14:20:17 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

MM好诗，很有韵味，等你的“补” Very Happy

谢谢JJ点评！因为朋友们和了好多，所以自罚[补] Wink

补点什么呢！就补一首小令吧，换一下韵哈 Razz

折花令--重阳
又到重阳，文人雅趣书诗语。忆旧事、词新起，闲赋曲悠扬，笛音倾吐。
菊蕊清淡，东篱进展霜华住。勤笔墨、香茗伴，妙句似连珠，连珠好句。

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Posted: 2012-10-31 17:15:38 Post subject:

再来一首五绝。　　《五绝·重阳》深秋寒菊艳，淡墨绘重阳。把盏临新地，登楼念故乡。

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Posted: 2012-11-04 07:06:45 Post subject:

MM的诗歌越写越好了，欣赏

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Posted: 2012-11-04 09:11:15 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

MM的诗歌越写越好了，欣赏

谢谢JJ鼓励！偶不是闭关修炼几个月嘛！不长进一小点点，不就辜负大家期望了，所以偶继续努力吧 Embarassed

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Posted: 2012-11-06 12:20:40 Post subject:

问好mm,希望读到你更多的作品

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Posted: 2012-11-06 14:58:04 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

问好mm,希望读到你更多的作品

问好JJ，我会继续的

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Posted: 2012-11-09 03:19:59 Post subject:

MM加油，等

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Posted: 2012-11-16 20:31:15 Post subject:

学习，问好！

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