白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-15 02:14:54 Post subject: 荷乡 |
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荷乡
芙蓉鼎盛时
夏便疯了
晨朝晖,暮也朝晖
热浪燥浮着满池漂絮
你不得不退避三舍,静候
秋凉时,采摘一捧清香的莲子
待冬夜品羹观雪
乐得恬逸 |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2012-10-15 02:34:42 Post subject: |
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小巧 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-15 04:17:52 Post subject: |
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练笔,来段玲珑的  |
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风动 秀才
Joined: 15 Dec 2006 Posts: 290
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Posted: 2012-10-18 10:12:42 Post subject: |
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哦,这首喜欢。 “芙蓉鼎盛时 / 夏便疯了”,出手不凡。 |
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风动 秀才
Joined: 15 Dec 2006 Posts: 290
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Posted: 2012-10-18 10:15:13 Post subject: |
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看的出是一鼓作气乘势而作。“晨朝晖,暮也朝晖”,外描形象,内涵生动。 |
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风动 秀才
Joined: 15 Dec 2006 Posts: 290
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Posted: 2012-10-18 10:16:58 Post subject: |
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“热浪燥浮着满池漂絮
你不得不退避三舍,静候” - 莲荷的品行。 |
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风动 秀才
Joined: 15 Dec 2006 Posts: 290
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Posted: 2012-10-18 10:20:34 Post subject: |
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“居高声自远,非是藉秋风。” |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-19 04:46:03 Post subject: |
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风动 wrote: |
“热浪燥浮着满池漂絮
你不得不退避三舍,静候” - 莲荷的品行。 |
谢谢理解。
这正是莲荷最可贵之处:出污泥而不染,清心明志 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-19 04:51:13 Post subject: |
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写诗言志,读诗也言志
从这两句诗便可知你为人 |
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韩少君 进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007 Posts: 2558 Location: 吉林四平 韩少君Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-19 06:13:38 Post subject: |
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 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-19 08:44:00 Post subject: |
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韩少君 wrote: |
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看这小人儿对着喇叭说什么呢?
谢谢阅读,问好  |
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