风动 秀才
Joined: 15 Dec 2006 Posts: 290
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Posted: 2012-09-21 10:58:56 Post subject: 七月,远山如黛 |
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不与鸟群为伍
让我的一亩三分地
再腾出一块荒芜
七月,远山如黛
我把自己一层层剥离
直至裸露成一尊瘦瘦的硬石
命运的铁锤啊
我为沉睡的黑夜
准备了丰富的火花
2012-9-21 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2012-09-21 12:08:19 Post subject: |
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欣赏这种境界。打得开眼界, 沉得下心境
希望读到你更多的诗歌 |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2012-09-22 04:03:27 Post subject: |
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精炼,充满了力量 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2012-09-22 14:35:38 Post subject: |
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美丽、耐读!——预祝风动中秋快乐幸福!! _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2012-09-29 10:33:30 Post subject: |
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风动,不时又上不来了吧?问好中秋。
可惜明天下雨,晕。  |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2012-09-29 12:02:58 Post subject: |
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好诗,掷地有声!
中秋快乐! |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2012-09-29 12:03:19 Post subject: |
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好诗,掷地有声!
中秋快乐! |
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青洋 秀才

Joined: 25 Sep 2012 Posts: 342 Location: 溫哥華 青洋Collection |
Posted: 2012-09-30 05:50:02 Post subject: |
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我為沉睡的黑夜,準備了豐富的火花。
好詩! _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影 |
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风动 秀才
Joined: 15 Dec 2006 Posts: 290
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Posted: 2012-10-05 09:36:24 Post subject: |
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多谢楼上各诗友的关注和阅评,感恩节问好!  |
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冷雨 秀才
Joined: 05 Nov 2010 Posts: 439
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Posted: 2012-10-17 18:13:25 Post subject: |
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问好! |
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风动 秀才
Joined: 15 Dec 2006 Posts: 290
风动Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-18 09:58:58 Post subject: |
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问好新朋友!  |
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