冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2012-06-13 10:45:49 Post subject: 七绝 题照 |
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(出神入化)
七绝 题照
(1)
此行兴意向边遐,寻见原为去眼纱。
滩下膝前穷问底,奶声还剩几些些?
(2)
如神境里思无涯,滩下遗珠水一洼。
可待时龙从浪涌?浴光赫赫看那吒。
注:时龙,小外孙Andrew属“马”,故称
(旁若无人) |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2012-06-14 08:16:24 Post subject: |
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童趣尽显。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2012-06-14 10:33:41 Post subject: |
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题照者童心复萌,玩沙者自得其乐。问好冰清! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2012-06-15 03:19:33 Post subject: |
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谢谢黄兄、庆弘君。
再看,未能尽意。作了点改动。 |
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司马策风 举人

Joined: 03 Dec 2006 Posts: 1211 Location: 温哥华 司马策风Collection |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2012-08-16 15:56:01 Post subject: |
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安然童趣,乐哉,冰清老师! |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2012-08-27 01:48:38 Post subject: |
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司马策风 wrote: |
童趣传神。不会是自己孙子吧? |
谢司马策风雅赏。哈哈,是小外孙。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2012-08-27 03:26:21 Post subject: |
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好可爱  |
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SLIU 秀才
Joined: 01 Jan 2010 Posts: 384
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Posted: 2012-08-28 16:38:55 Post subject: |
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童趣,可爱。。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2012-08-30 10:23:51 Post subject: |
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问好冰清老师, peace 刚才处理了一下,现在回帖应该没问题了 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2012-09-05 22:57:04 Post subject: |
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是啊,人生难得这纯真!谢谢sliu6君。 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2012-09-05 22:59:30 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
问好冰清老师, peace 刚才处理了一下,现在回帖应该没问题了 |
谢谢!哈哈,你又多打了两个字  |
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