晓松 举人
  
  Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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				 Posted: 2007-04-17 19:56:31    Post subject: 《七律?秋思》(游子吟参赛) | 
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				《七律?秋思》
 
 
 
桑梓一别几万重,
 
常将心曲寄孤鸿。
 
牵魂惟愿高堂健,
 
落魄犹存爱子情。
 
善借金风舒倦骨,
 
笑迎苦雨踏歌行。
 
安湖秋叶堪称美,
 
岳麓霜枫别样红。
 
 
 
[注]:安湖:安大略湖。 | 
			 
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		冰清 同进士出身
 
  Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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				 Posted: 2007-04-17 22:43:13    Post subject:  | 
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				| 情切切,意殷殷! | 
			 
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		晓松 举人
  
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				 Posted: 2007-04-18 17:40:05    Post subject:  | 
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				| 谢冰清老师点评! | 
			 
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		白帆 童生
 
  Joined: 02 Aug 2007 Posts: 12
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				 Posted: 2007-08-02 07:16:18    Post subject:  | 
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		太阳之子 童生
 
  Joined: 06 Aug 2007 Posts: 17
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				 Posted: 2007-08-06 22:01:30    Post subject:  | 
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