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风雨怡园

白水
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Posted: 2012-06-01 21:16:54 Post subject: 风雨怡园

勿忘我随风而去的你，在雨中飘零的勿忘我对风说如果蓝色的记忆只剩下一枚漂亮的贝壳不如忘却连翘明明柔弱的花偏要长成高高的树风起时，你东倒西歪我隔窗观雨，着急地对他说 “老公，救命！” 2012，怡园第一朵玫瑰往年，我常喜欢剪一支玫瑰赏娇美孤芳叹花开花落今晨，你静悄悄地吐蕊静悄悄地在风雨肆虐的院落，陪伴满地落英 * 6.1 Toronto风雨大作，怡园小恙

白水
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Posted: 2012-06-03 01:37:42 Post subject:

石雕面对空旷的怡园默立。三分钟三分钟便释然了死亡，悲哀，或者忧伤告别了那些无关痛痒的呢喃燕语我更欣赏夏日雷雨的号啕大哭，这本真原始的野性淅淅沥沥的每一根都是她温柔的手指轻轻地为你，拂去脸上的蒙尘灵语怡园，之所以被称作怡园因了它的空灵怡神怡心诗歌，有时恰好是这样的文字花儿也一样你听，小鸟啾鸣，花语无声但我知道她一定懂了点头摇首，轻轻清清

hepingdao
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Posted: 2012-06-03 02:21:36 Post subject:

勿忘我一棵草，一朵花，我是用来忘却的一百年，十年，或者仅仅一个上午在风中，在雨中，你还要记得我吗 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

冰清
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Posted: 2012-06-03 02:57:18 Post subject:

白水好悟。花魂，鹤性，木心石腹，全在“风雨怡园”

白水
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Posted: 2012-06-03 09:05:14 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

勿忘我

一棵草，一朵花，我是用来忘却的

一百年，十年，或者仅仅一个上午

在风中，在雨中，你还要记得我吗
...

哈，所见略同。6.1我家花园里的勿忘我被风吹落了一地，惨不忍睹，让人无法再相信美丽的花语 Sad

白水
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Posted: 2012-06-03 09:11:20 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

白水好悟。
花魂，鹤性，木心石腹，全在“风雨怡园” Laughing

wow,好美的回帖，让我想起两句诗歌“寒塘渡鹤影,冷月葬诗魂” Wink

问好冰清，周末愉快

qinghongh
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Posted: 2012-06-03 11:55:37 Post subject:

落花有落花之美，古诗有”吹落黄花满地金“的描述。

白水
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Posted: 2012-06-04 09:27:16 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

落花有落花之美，古诗有”吹落黄花满地金“的描述。

谢谢qinghongh.
你家的花园那天是否也被吹得乱七八糟了？种花我得好好向张文请教。问好 Very Happy

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