sfiawong
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 Posted: 2009-05-26 18:59:06 Post subject: Life ahead (Kaiku)前路芒芒 (虾公日式俳句短詩) |
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Life ahead (Kaiku)
There're obtacles ahead in life
Early one who must step forward bravely
Don't look behind for rest
前路芒芒 (虾公日式俳句短詩)
勇往向直前
早春尤未見花發
後望心變遷
註:這是日人最喜愛的日式排句短詩,
是最難寫的一種短詩,加配中文更是難
上加難的短詩.查日式俳句短詩,
要排成5+7+5型,內含一季節詞彙.
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| Posted: 2009-05-27 09:36:05 Post subject: |
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Kaiku? I thought it is Haiku.
Yes, very hard to write good haiku.
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| Posted: 2009-05-27 17:52:52 Post subject: |
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Kaiku? I thought it is Haiku.
Yes, very hard to write good haiku. |
Haiku is one of the more difficult to write poems. I have written a few pieces only.
First, we must get a good idea and write immediately othwerwise, it may be gone away and you can't get back a little bit later.
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| Posted: 2009-05-27 18:21:28 Post subject: |
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我觉得俳句（はいく）之所以较难移植或翻译，是因为语言音乐性的差异。
日语中五-七-五，可构成独特的音乐效果（5、7与其民族队数字的偏爱也有关系）。 |
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