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春从天上来--虔诚礼佛并依韵和冰清老师之《春从天上来》

笑聊
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Posted: 2012-01-24 22:15:20 Post subject: 春从天上来--虔诚礼佛并依韵和冰清老师之《春从天上来》

问候冰清老师春节好！问候北美枫师友们春节好!欢迎师友们用不同形式跟帖！文/笑聊临屏依韵虔诚礼佛和冰清老师《春从天上来》：正月天晴，恰数九寒流，礼佛虔诚。一路祥瑞，默诵悲经，胸纳四海空灵。眼观新联对，渡佳节、爽快娱情。劝人人、觉应和气待，世态清清。良心摆中才好，又苦度何妨？记得芽萌，疏影虬枝，雪霜欺辱，墙角独自孤形。念阿弥陀佛！无冬夏、环宇能行。大光明，普照人间日，乾道飞升！注：初三天晴好日。余年年前往苏州西园礼佛。余觉得人人都怀着善意好心，则世道清平祥和矣！故以《春从天上来》调填制，以增节日氛围！

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Posted: 2012-01-24 23:38:43 Post subject:

欣赏了！！ ——给您拜年！~！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2012-01-25 16:07:49 Post subject:

虔诚礼佛，佛即心生。唱和俱佳，“乾道飞升”。问好笑聊兄！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2012-01-26 07:21:53 Post subject:

笑聊君好和。临屏依韵，纵思倾笔，既飞洒自如，又寄意言外。佩服。谢谢! 几点小建议，待斟酌： “默诵经文”文属文韵；“良心当中才好”；“又苦修何妨？”中之当、修，平仄似不符。祝福新春!

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Posted: 2012-01-27 00:15:13 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

笑聊君好和。临屏依韵，纵思倾笔，既飞洒自如，又寄意言外。佩服。谢谢!
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谢谢冰清老师指正！已改正三处错误。

笑聊
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Posted: 2012-01-27 00:24:44 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

问候冰清老师春节好！问候北美枫师友们春节好!欢迎师友们用不同形式跟帖！
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注：默诵悲经。悲经，大悲咒经。

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Posted: 2012-01-27 00:27:13 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

欣赏了！！
——给您拜年！~！

谢谢山城子老师赏读！问老师新春愉快！

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Posted: 2012-01-27 00:29:21 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

虔诚礼佛，佛即心生。唱和俱佳，“乾道飞升”。
问好笑聊兄！

黄老师新年好！谢谢老师赏评！

数处错误已经冰清老师指正。

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Posted: 2012-01-31 06:28:46 Post subject:

欣赏唱和佳作，问好楼上各位老师新春快乐！

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Posted: 2012-02-03 03:24:42 Post subject:

家珍诗友新年好！

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