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多伦多雪后初晴
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PostPosted: 2011-12-04 06:48:01    Post subject: 多伦多雪后初晴 Reply with quote

多伦多雪后初晴(排律,试帖体)

走进小阳春,
凉秋日近人。
寒风吹落叶,
冻雨荡轻尘。
花草前阶旧,
青枫后院新。
边城天见雪,
大地树堆银。
雁去三排字,
霞披五彩金。
昏鸦一片片,
弯月送流云。

Nov. 30,2011,Hormish Garden of Toronto(南河书院)5:00 to 6:00pm

南河书院
南河诗话


诗体:排律,试帖体

诗体结构

前三联:多伦多入秋后“小阳春”气候。

后三联:11月30日多伦多“雪后初晴”景致,这场初雪极富“阳春三月”的气候特征(实际下过几小时后雪水就开始流动),最后把话题让给黄昏的“鸦”与每日变化的“弯月” ……


多伦多“小阳春”气候(2011)

11月11日,Remembrance Day(加拿大国殇日),入秋以来多伦多第一次肉眼可见的细小雪丝,18日重复
11月23日,周二晚间,冻雨
11月30日,上午下雪,下午晴
12月3日,多伦多气温突破零下3度,大多以北零下4度
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(绿色圣诞可期) Rolling Eyes Laughing
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2011-12-04 07:19:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

雪后初晴景物新,南河畅笔好心情。问好!
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PostPosted: 2011-12-04 07:49:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏连兄好律。
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PostPosted: 2011-12-05 01:43:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

走进小阳春,
凉秋日近人。

欣赏佳作,问好连南河诗友。
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PostPosted: 2011-12-05 22:47:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好连兄!学习工稳好律。
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PostPosted: 2011-12-11 10:08:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢黄洋界庆宏丁家珍笑聊点评!

与《小聚Milliken Park》相比中间几联的对丈有所进步。诗的触角还在探索多伦多气候变化中的"又一方天"的情景。

诗者,画境也;画者,诗境也;诗画兼具者,书法也。


12月10日,多伦多气温突破零下5度(Hormish Garden of Toronto,电视天气预报零下7度)。自2004年以来,这里通过零下5度的首次出现日期,下雪的首次出现日期和零下最低温度的首次出现日期等3项指标观察多伦多的气候,前两项指标均显示出有向后推延的趋势,第三项指标显示多伦多气温有逐年上升的趋势。

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英国一位科学家2007年就说过,人类拯救地球的黄金时间只剩下7年。人类对地球生态的破坏是不可逆转的。幸运的是美国加州NASA的科学家上周一(Dec.5, 2011)公布了一条消息:太阳系外一颗类似地球的行星已经找到……

New Planet Earth-like象地球一样的新行星

NASA has found a new planet outside Earth's solar system that is eerily similar to Earth in important aspects.NASA已经在地球的太阳系外围发现一颗新行星,许多重要的方面与地球奇怪地相似。

Scientists say the temperature on the surface of the planet is about a comfy 22 degrees Celsius. Its star could almost be a twin of Earth's sun. It probably has water and land. It was found in the middle of the habitable zone,making it the best potential target for life.科学家们说,这颗行星的表面温度大约是舒适的22摄氏度,它的星系仿佛是地球太阳系的一个双胞胎,很可能有水和陆地,中间是最具潜力的适于生命生存的地带。

This is the first time NASA's Kepler planet-hunting telescope confirmed a planet outside Earth's solar system in the not-too-hot, not-too-cold habitable zone.这是NASA's Kepler的太空搜索试望远镜首次证实在地球太阳系外存在一个既不太冷又不太热的具有生命适居带的行星。

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