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续和莹雪题春韵图
黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2007-04-14 08:29:37    Post subject: 续和莹雪题春韵图 Reply with quote

七绝 续和莹雪题春韵图
余兴未尽,再凑回热闹,同乐同乐.
汀上娇娃水里花 ,
枝繁叶茂绽春芽,
依 依自顾池中影,
自制 衣裙恋碧涯.
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-04-14 16:26:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
七绝 续和莹雪题春韵图
余兴未尽,再凑回热闹,同乐同乐.
汀上娇娃水里花 ,
枝繁叶茂绽春芽,
依 依自顾池中影,
自制 衣裙恋碧涯.
七绝-续和黄洋界(同韵)
岸畔仙姿赏艳花,
新枝日暖草初芽。
问谁清律歌诗句,
闲舞衣裙醉碧崖。
舞马词-续和黄洋界(同韵)此亦唐人六古绝句,
湖畔风轻若画,
理妆赏玩奇花。
此景慢书倾雅,
清歌欲醉天涯。
五绝-续和黄洋界(同韵)
弄妆梳美发,
闲对岸边花。
韵律倾心尽,
高歌向翠崖
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2007-04-14 16:50:10    Post subject: 致莹雪 Reply with quote

莹雪才思敏捷,倚马可待,真快手也.学习.
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PostPosted: 2007-04-14 18:37:40    Post subject: Re: 续和莹雪题春韵图 Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
七绝 续和莹雪题春韵图
余兴未尽,再凑回热闹,同乐同乐.
汀上娇娃水里花 ,
枝繁叶茂绽春芽,
依依自顾池中影,
自制衣裙恋碧涯.


黄兄的诗一首比一首好,你不觉得吗?跟莹雪对诗好比跟高手下棋,能学到东西。我再与你和一首,同乐同乐:

倒影湖中姊妹花,
春心荡漾欲发芽;
郎君三月无音信,
日日相思在水涯。
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-04-15 00:55:13    Post subject: Re: 致莹雪 Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
莹雪才思敏捷,倚马可待,真快手也.学习.
呵呵,黄兄过誉啦!
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-04-15 00:57:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

今天有事明日再和。 thanks
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PostPosted: 2007-04-15 09:22:02    Post subject: 唱和书怀 Reply with quote

唱和书怀
晓松兄为水边倩女代抒心曲,好,再凑四句以表唱和心情.

一帧仕女动诗情,
莹雪身先奏玉筝,
学步枫坛高韵调,
同君联袂鼓与笙.
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-04-15 16:42:35    Post subject: Re: 续和莹雪题春韵图 Reply with quote

晓松 wrote:

黄兄的诗一首比一首好,你不觉得吗?跟莹雪对诗好比跟高手下棋,能学到东西。我再与你和一首,同乐同乐:

倒影湖中姊妹花,
春心荡漾欲发芽;
郎君三月无音信,
日日相思在水涯。
呵呵,那我也再凑一首
倩影清波照若花,
闲观细草吐新芽。
雀歌燕舞闻春信,
幽趣飞扬至远崖。
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-04-15 17:03:38    Post subject: Re: 唱和书怀 Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
唱和书怀
晓松兄为水边倩女代抒心曲,好,再凑四句以表唱和心情.

一帧仕女动诗情,
莹雪身先奏玉筝,
学步枫坛高韵调,
同君联袂鼓与笙.

再回四句
偶观图卷动诗情,
书句黄洋奏妙筝。
清韵谦言歌美语,
已非彩绘画中生。
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PostPosted: 2007-04-15 17:17:05    Post subject: 致莹雪 Reply with quote

诗思洋溢,值得欣赏.
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