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新诗 – 顽皮
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PostPosted: 2011-08-26 19:41:34    Post subject: 新诗 – 顽皮 Reply with quote

顽皮 魏鹏展

不悦的表情
声音过大后反而
无声
无法明白的抄写
又是无笑声的小息
好的事情为甚么会被骂?
重做
记得左边又忘了右边
看到又似乎看不到
又写一次
我画的画很美丽
你知道吗?
红彤彤的苹果可能有
虫子

2011年3月5日 夜
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PostPosted: 2011-09-04 05:56:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

又写一次
我画的画很美丽
你知道吗?
红彤彤的苹果可能有
虫子

表现手法新颖,学习,问好。
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PostPosted: 2011-09-04 06:00:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

chenrunmin wrote:
又写一次
...



謝謝﹗太過獎了。
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