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思想.惩罚 [激励]
boyintian
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PostPosted: 2007-04-12 19:00:09    Post subject: 思想.惩罚 [激励] Reply with quote

思想.惩罚
云层暗淡而又凄惘

太阳没有静止却在迷航

受惊的群鸟早已失向

苍茫的大地颓石冷凉

死寂填满了大街小巷

天的沉默如此异样

脚下传出无声的歌唱

无声却又胜过雷响

时远时近心跳般缩张

静寂变的刀尖一样锋芒

空气也成了高耸的铁墙

时间陷入了黑暗的彷徨

夜与月开始争夺时光

雾与光受控于迷惘

江河湖海水流震荡

另一个世界突然大门开敞

粼粼华光

游魂们挤挤撞撞

扶者雾色摇晃

空间在被争抢

抢的近乎疯狂

谁能阻挡

无法阻挡

世界再死寂中暴响

野兽放弃了思想

人类逃亡到梦乡

游魂翻腾叫嚷

猎物无处可藏

疯子们正流浪

都被逮入了魔掌

醉鬼们正放荡

也纷纷落入了魔网

他们被拽向屠场

去掉头发拔光衣裳

一个个串在烤架上

烤架下涌着火热的岩浆

待其血肉被烤的炙烫

灵魂被一捶砸出脑腔

赤裸裸却又晶晶亮

成群结队被游魂们赶进牢房
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-04-12 20:32:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

可以婉转些表达,个见,多来交流.
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GOWITHWIND
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PostPosted: 2007-04-26 18:30:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

黑色的,有点深
灰色的,有点空
黑灰的,恐怖
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