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绝句-咏兰
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PostPosted: 2011-06-28 03:50:52    Post subject: 绝句-咏兰 Reply with quote
即兴临屏顺接绝句-咏兰兼和冰清老师（孤雁入群格）
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足音空谷不临门
偏喜幽芳独善身
山雨劲风才洗髓
清香弥漫晚来春
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PostPosted: 2011-06-29 03:55:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
清香弥漫晚来春
山野独居远世尘
羽扇纶巾飘摇过
相逢对面不识君
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PostPosted: 2011-06-29 12:06:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
喜读笑聊君即兴临屏之作。赞个：

“偏喜幽芳独善身”

幽芳善顺，已见兰花生性之清纯；
“偏喜”，则更突现兰花格调之高雅。
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2011-06-30 20:25:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢sliu6的和诗，只要第二句改一个“独”字，第四句改两字，就是一首好绝了（飞雁出群格） Very Happy Very Happy


谢谢冰清老师赞誉点评！问好。
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PostPosted: 2011-06-30 21:06:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢笑聊。。 我那是临屏顺口溜，不过好像还是符合新韵的 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2011-07-02 03:48:09    Post subject: Reply with quote
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谢谢笑聊。。 我那是临屏顺口溜，不过好像还是符合新韵的 Very Happy


sliu6君习惯用新韵，而我却用平水韵评之，此乃余之过也。但还是提醒一下，是新韵千万注明。否则就像我一样闹出笑话来了。 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2011-07-05 05:27:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
赞同冰清老师的赏析。
向笑聊老师学习、问好。
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水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞
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PostPosted: 2011-07-06 02:08:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
笑聊 wrote:
sliu6 wrote:
谢谢笑聊。。 我那是临屏顺口溜，不过好像还是符合新韵的 Very Happy


sliu6君习惯用新韵，而我却用平水韵评之，此乃余之过也。但还是提醒一下，是新韵千万注明。否则就像我一样闹出笑话来了。 Very Happy Very Happy


笑聊同志严谨认真的态度值得学习 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2011-07-06 14:51:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
胡恢宗 wrote:
赞同冰清老师的赏析。
向笑聊老师学习、问好。


谢谢胡兄雅赏，问好！

老师愧不敢当，还是兄弟相称吧。观兄诗，知兄年轮高弟多多，称一声兄长，已使我惶恐了。
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PostPosted: 2011-07-06 15:03:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
sliu6 wrote:
笑聊 wrote:
sliu6 wrote:
谢谢笑聊。。 我那是临屏顺口溜，不过好像还是符合新韵的 Very Happy


sliu6君习惯用新韵，而我却用平水韵评之，此乃余之过也。但还是提醒一下，是新韵千万注明。否则就像我一样闹出笑话来了。 Very Happy Very Happy


笑聊同志严谨认真的态度值得学习 Very Happy


放松一些，千万不要拘谨，我时常这样告诫自己。sliu6君幽默诙谐的语气使得北美枫人气大振，北美枫需要这样的人才，来调节气氛！
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PostPosted: 2011-07-06 15:58:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
Cool 偷着看看，嘻嘻 want to smile
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PostPosted: 2011-07-06 22:29:32    Post subject: Reply with quote
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Cool 偷着看看，嘻嘻 want to smile


问好莹雪mm!

你还偷着看我的“笑话”，我的老脸不知如何放了。快来救为兄！ Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2011-07-07 01:40:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好笑卿gg！
Shocked没觉有什么不妥哦 question 怎么都喊“救”兄了 boring
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PostPosted: 2011-07-07 04:44:01    Post subject: Reply with quote
莹雪 wrote:
问好笑卿gg！
Shocked没觉有什么不妥哦 question 怎么都喊“救”兄了 boring


莹雪mm夏安！

你不觉sliu6君词锋犀利，为兄已经败下阵去了？Sad
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PostPosted: 2011-07-08 01:37:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
笑聊 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
问好笑卿gg！
Shocked没觉有什么不妥哦 question 怎么都喊“救”兄了 boring


莹雪mm夏安！
...


呵呵，笑聊版主还真会开玩笑呢！ Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2011-07-08 03:48:32    Post subject: Reply with quote
sliu6 wrote:
笑聊 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
问好笑卿gg！
Shocked没觉有什么不妥哦 question 怎么都喊“救”兄了 boring


莹雪mm夏安！
...


呵呵，笑聊版主还真会开玩笑呢！ Very Happy Very Happy


哦，谢谢sliu6君安慰！ Very Happy Very Happy
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