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走,走吧
古月灵秋
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PostPosted: 2011-04-16 05:57:59    Post subject: 走,走吧 Reply with quote

走 ,走吧

你一直爱着
爱着这些疼痛和伤疤
爱着这些泪水和咸涩

白天显在的小路上的石头
它们阻隔着你的好运
也挡在你梦的入口

这些乌云
把你的命运
写进皱褶的天空
铅色的字体背后
是谁苦难翻滚的用意

花刺和荆棘
在你蜿蜒的曲径上
像无情的小兽
它们欲望贪婪
尖锐的叫声狰狞

你沉默
相信在一个字的攀爬中
苦难就是另外一种甜蜜
走 走吧
一个声音在你的天空
像太阳敲响的钟

姐姐

雨水漫过山冈
姐姐 我在你的视线里
继续跋涉 脚下的荆棘
它们疼痛之后 留下细碎的花朵

姐姐 你说出的阳光和好天气
紧随着我的勇气 自信和耐力
我坚持着你的梦 继续着
山径是这样坎坷 一条青蛇
匍匐在生命必经的丛林

姐姐 天色就这样不经意地暗淡下来
我看见浓重的夜色怎样向我袭来
占去我大面积青青的草甸
我也看见你提着灯笼
怎样和萤火虫一起告诉我光明

姐姐 让我说出雨水
说出我们的命运 就像说出
一片安静的山冈和一片秘密的森林
说出一条河流经久不息的灵魂
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PostPosted: 2011-04-17 03:27:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

真情,自然
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PostPosted: 2011-04-20 05:30:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
真情,自然


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